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Author Topic: Kesashi's Gallery  (Read 140102 times)

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #60 on: September 29, 2013, 10:00:42 PM »
arm is actually way to short. did u draw the clothes first? and again. please provide waist line
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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #61 on: September 30, 2013, 06:07:40 PM »
arm is actually way to short. did u draw the clothes first? and again. please provide waist line


I actually did draw the body first, if you mean hairline i'll see what I can do. I actually went and looked up waist line and it seemed pretty proportional.

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #62 on: September 30, 2013, 06:40:55 PM »
then draw the body how it looks before drawing the clothes. look at the arm. if its extended like that, should it be that short?


her hands are tiny. like a baby. and where is the waist?
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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #63 on: September 30, 2013, 07:36:03 PM »
then draw the body how it looks before drawing the clothes. look at the arm. if its extended like that, should it be that short?


her hands are tiny. like a baby. and where is the waist?

The waist should be at the middle of her left arm, somewhere in that general region.

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #64 on: September 30, 2013, 10:57:47 PM »
Random quick-sketch of Esashi


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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #65 on: October 01, 2013, 11:07:42 AM »
draw bigger hands. didn't you just tell me you were going to aim for more older realistic style than the cutesy ones?
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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #66 on: October 01, 2013, 11:50:22 AM »
draw bigger hands. didn't you just tell me you were going to aim for more older realistic style than the cutesy ones?

I am going to, but I'm learning proportionality before i do that

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« Reply #67 on: October 01, 2013, 02:03:54 PM »
try both at the same time. it's not like you need another set of arms to do what you need to do.
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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #68 on: October 01, 2013, 04:22:12 PM »
yeah, while you can focus mainly on one, it cant hurt if you know already you are doing something wrong to try and do it better :P
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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #69 on: October 06, 2013, 04:12:50 PM »
Well I used my own hands for reference in this one so I hope they're big enough. However, this is probably as realistic as my style's going to get.

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #70 on: October 06, 2013, 11:13:15 PM »
but the body is too long. compare the legs to the length of the arms.


are you absolutely sure you sraw their bodies before drawing their clothes on?


it looks like they are either all anorexic or their secretly coat hangers underneath those clothes.
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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #71 on: October 06, 2013, 11:38:46 PM »
I am 100% certain I start with a stick figure and then I draw them step by step like this


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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #72 on: October 07, 2013, 12:54:02 AM »
i don't think you do. can u draw a character semi nude?

either you have no idea how to do proportions when it comes to legs. or you make their clothes over shadow their body features. or you make them soo kinny, we can't see body features.
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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #73 on: October 07, 2013, 06:28:21 PM »
Let me show you

It starts off like this


before I do the real anatomy it turns into this


There are still two more steps before I draw the clothes.

3: clean up step 2
4: draw the body


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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #74 on: October 07, 2013, 06:37:02 PM »
step one is already wrong. you made it too long. if you look at step 2, you can also see how it doesn't matche up to your characters pose. some of it goes barely outside the clothes. and thats something that should be visible
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