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Author Topic: Kesashi's Gallery  (Read 88982 times)

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Offline Lord Kesashi

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #45 on: August 27, 2013, 12:06:32 AM »
I'm really liking it  :hmm: ; can't wait to do the highlights


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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #46 on: August 27, 2013, 11:15:42 PM »
Wow, looks nice!
Can't wait to see it finished o/

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #47 on: August 28, 2013, 09:57:19 AM »
nice so far, looks like a pain to draw around each scale :P
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« Reply #48 on: August 29, 2013, 05:50:12 PM »
Decided to add both of the shading  :thumbsup:



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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #49 on: August 29, 2013, 05:54:17 PM »
His teeth need a little more shading, and that mustache thing creeps me out  :ohmy:
Overall a nice piece

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #50 on: August 30, 2013, 10:57:35 AM »
maybe make the moustache a bit more flowy like this
but good job so far, i agree with DB, the teeth could use a bit more shading.
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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #51 on: September 04, 2013, 07:57:04 PM »
maybe make the moustache a bit more flowy like this
but good job so far, i agree with DB, the teeth could use a bit more shading.

Thanks i'll try that mustache design instead xD, and i did use too bright of a grey to shade the teeth I'll see what I can do about that.

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #52 on: September 04, 2013, 08:31:01 PM »
You have dimension and form down but your proportions are not consistent. The character you just shown is pretty skinny by giving detail to his rib cage. But his muscles on his arm and his abs don't fit. Even if he was meant to be skinny, he's "too skinny". His shoulders are far too close to his neck, making his neck appear too long.

For hair, its far too back to his head. If you establish the hairline, you can see it goes far past his forhead. But at least you established thickness to it. So its not the most problematic part.

By the way, how old is Lord King? If he's around his late teens to adulthood, then you should aim to make their eyes slightly smaller and his face slightly longer by giving him more chin and less "cheeks". But even so, if he was meant to appear younger, his babyface doesn't appear to fit with his built body yet skinny figure.

His pants hide his entire form of his legs. And its hard to determine if he's wearing denim, khakis, or just cloth. The pants are just slim straight. You need to add some folds or creases. The smallest things give texture to your clothes.
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« Reply #53 on: September 04, 2013, 10:08:09 PM »
Thank you Loren  :thumbsup: as thorough as always. With such a workload, I'll probably just redraw him again.

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« Reply #54 on: September 26, 2013, 02:01:15 AM »
First render of the picture of Ella


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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #55 on: September 26, 2013, 04:12:29 AM »
Looks good! :-)

A quick tip: white on white is a little hard to "read." Adding some sort of background—even if it's just a quick bit of color—can help define things a little and make the image easier to look at:



Of course, doing that makes the white appear even brighter. Pure whites really don't occur in art (except for very reflective highlights), so it might be a good idea to darken them a little, and bring in a little of the surrounding color (ambient light). In this case it would probably look better to make the white suit and hair ever so slightly darker, with a hint of magenta/pink. Done right they would still appear white, but they wouldn't be unnaturally so.

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« Reply #56 on: September 26, 2013, 06:03:20 PM »
Looks good! :-)

A quick tip: white on white is a little hard to "read." Adding some sort of background—even if it's just a quick bit of color—can help define things a little and make the image easier to look at:



Of course, doing that makes the white appear even brighter. Pure whites really don't occur in art (except for very reflective highlights), so it might be a good idea to darken them a little, and bring in a little of the surrounding color (ambient light). In this case it would probably look better to make the white suit and hair ever so slightly darker, with a hint of magenta/pink. Done right they would still appear white, but they wouldn't be unnaturally so.

I think I've rambled on enough.  :tongue:

Wow, I hadn't noticed how right you are  ;D I'll try to darken the clothes and hair and make sure it's still the brightest color  :thumbsup:

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« Reply #57 on: September 28, 2013, 12:26:11 PM »
Alright time for the second render  ;D

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Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Reply #58 on: September 28, 2013, 12:44:59 PM »
:thumbsup: nice job

it needs a little shade on the right side of the face and neck, same like you have on the throusers and cloak... 

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« Reply #59 on: September 29, 2013, 09:19:50 PM »
:thumbsup: nice job

it needs a little shade on the right side of the face and neck, same like you have on the throusers and cloak...

Alright, third render time  ;D . Apparently its defies the laws of digital physics for anime studio to put a shading effect with a gradient effect  :hmm: (the head has a gradient for the illusion of shading) so instead i used the auto shading on layer shading. Only problem i had with that was the fact that the head and the neck were on the same layer, and the shading would stack. So i'd either have to separate them in order to keep the shading illusion under the head and... who cares third render...