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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #240 on: February 25, 2016, 01:57:09 PM »
Do you trace from your sketch to a new paper? Somehow that just looks really... clean  ;D love it!
I think that her face is a bit off somehow. Something about left side doesn't look right, but i can't really say why. If you feel like going through the trouble, you could try drawing centre line and double checking the position of her nose, mouth, eyes and chin.
Other than that, i think it's perfect  :D would be awesome to see her colored!
Keep up the good work!   :thumbsup:

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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #241 on: February 25, 2016, 02:29:42 PM »
Wow, these are great! I really like your style.

I've always wanted to draw, but I'm not very skilled at it  :push:

Great work!

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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #242 on: February 25, 2016, 03:13:17 PM »
@Miska Actually that is the only copy I have of the picture, other than the camera taken shot XD It's not at clean as it looks but yes! I do try to make my lines clear.

Thank you for your advice! I will try that XD

@WAChristmas Thank you very much! It took me quite a number of years to get up to this level, so you can still learn it if you wanted ;)
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« Reply #243 on: February 25, 2016, 08:05:32 PM »
I see a snake, a moose, a mountain range and an ocean.

@Swearzy Hahaha, what is there to be afraid of from an older sister anyway? XD

I'm Lucky I'm the eldest, saying that makes me feel old :P The girls in my family are the... uhh bosses. We are pushed aside and told to take a seat when things get tough...  ._. .k.. kowaii~ o.o

Lol. Perspectives different there. They weren't all easy to spot after all....

I getcha ._. I'm kind of... bossy myself...

ahhhh, darkness, nicely done :P
nice hidden stuff :P
i couldnt tell what most of them were, but these were what i found
-skunk/hedgehog behind her head
-bat/pair of eyes at hips
-eye on chest?
-vulture? at knee

-i think it looks less like a wolf and more like a tiger cub or something, the one at the top

threres a couple more but i have no idea what they are, and its probably just my imagination at this point :P

Thanks!
Oh, a couple others said it looked more like a cat than a dog too  :unsure:

Did anyone spot the face above her knee?
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of my OC Sara Feretta (I have a Sara too Swearzy :P )
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Wow, it's so much easier to see the bad spots here O_O But I'm not sure of all of them.
If you see something that can be improved, please share!

awesome design on that WIP character. looking forward to the finished image.:)

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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #244 on: February 26, 2016, 12:25:11 PM »

WIP - of my OC Sara Feretta (I have a Sara too Swearzy :P )



Nein! She needs to be a super genius, have a white lab coat and over sized hipster glasses!!!

Oh noes you're bossy!?...   ._.

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« Reply #245 on: February 27, 2016, 10:07:23 AM »
@Miska Actually that is the only copy I have of the picture, other than the camera taken shot XD It's not at clean as it looks but yes! I do try to make my lines clear.
That's awesome, i can never draw such a clean lines  :D i always have to trace my sketch to a new paper before inking.
Keep up the good work! :)

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« Reply #246 on: February 27, 2016, 10:21:52 AM »
Awesome!
These look really cool  :clapping:
Oh and out of curiosity, how long did these take you to draw?
Aim high, otherwise what is the point in trying?

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« Reply #247 on: February 28, 2016, 04:39:01 PM »
Nein! She needs to be a super genius, have a white lab coat and over sized hipster glasses!!!

Oh noes you're bossy!?...   ._.

My Sara is a genius! But she's royalty XD And is a wind element user ho ho.

That's awesome, i can never draw such a clean lines  :D i always have to trace my sketch to a new paper before inking.
Keep up the good work! :)

Thank you Miska!

Awesome!
These look really cool  :clapping:
Oh and out of curiosity, how long did these take you to draw?

Thank you!

The first picture took roughly
Sketching - 3 hours
Darkening - 2 hours
Toning - 5 hours.

And the second sketch took about less than an hour to do. I try to keep it clean, so I erase a lot as well.
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« Reply #248 on: February 29, 2016, 10:16:18 PM »
Finished the picture.... I think.

I like how it came out. The hand perspective didn't come out as I wanted. It's a little hard to see here because of the lighting (come back to me scanner! T_T).

And there are a few glaring contradictions in this one. One being her hair, which was supposed to be black. But the rest of her is black already....

And the other one is....

Sara Feretta

...the arm on the left. I'd already finished colouring everything when I realized I'd left out the arm at the back...

As you can see, it is there now (it was tricky to place it) but it's position is still, er, wrong.  :unsure:
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« Reply #249 on: February 29, 2016, 10:31:32 PM »
yeah the right hand, the left ponting hand looks thin based on proportion and body is considered nce haha.Btw the dress thing looks like flower petals and is her outfit fitted i like the texture of it men and the design looks great the hair flow great job bud and the eyes ok but i just suggest u put some circle light on it it will look lively because of her emotion will fit it  :D

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« Reply #250 on: March 01, 2016, 04:44:49 AM »

My Sara is a genius! But she's royalty XD And is a wind element user ho ho.


But mine is also a princess... well heir to the richest Corporation on earth! And! She is Immortal! Hehe *Proud* :P

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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #251 on: March 02, 2016, 04:53:04 PM »
Sara Feretta. That name really rolls off the tongue. Great character design there Echo

And I haven't seen you do that sort of inky flowy work before. Like the one of the girl lying down with that black stuff flowing about. Looks real artistic

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« Reply #252 on: March 02, 2016, 05:04:08 PM »
@Killer B !!SAMA!! Thanks! I see what you mean about the eye lights. I often forget to do that ._.

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But mine is also a princess... well heir to the richest Corporation on earth! And! She is Immortal! Hehe *Proud* :P

Heir to the... okay, that counts  :unsure:
Well... mine is mortal - and she has a lot of friends : )

@Lego Thanks comrade! I was advised to go darker. So I went darker hehe. Any more and it'd be darker than black  ;)
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« Reply #253 on: March 02, 2016, 05:37:22 PM »
thats some nice rendering you have there. especially on the skirt, it looks very textured.
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« Reply #254 on: March 03, 2016, 12:43:28 AM »


Heir to the... okay, that counts  :unsure:
Well... mine is mortal - and she has a lot of friends : )


Fine, you win. :(