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Coin & Flour
« on: January 28, 2013, 12:52:06 AM »
I have this ongoing web manga Coin & Flour. It's a love story between a Demon and an Angel with a little twist.  ::)



Feel free to read it online at:

We also have its Motion Manga App available in Amazon, Google Play and Itunes. You can download the app if you're interested.
The App got top.1 best selling manga app in amazon.com >w<;;;


Oh oh oh! And please. Like the fanpage in facebook. It will be a big help for us.

Thank you for the time and God bless~ :heart:
« Last Edit: January 28, 2013, 10:12:43 AM by Hasith »
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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2013, 05:18:21 AM »
Very impressive. I like the art in it. I haven't read past chapter two, but it seems very nice indeed. Not sure what's to happen but I want to guess they fall in love, and that is not allowed ^^;;

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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2013, 09:13:12 AM »
Very impressive. I like the art in it. I haven't read past chapter two, but it seems very nice indeed. Not sure what's to happen but I want to guess they fall in love, and that is not allowed ^^;;

Thank you for the compliment Jack @w@. I've been drawing the next chapter. Hope I can finish it quickly XD
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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2013, 10:13:35 AM »
cdpoke no links allowed inside posts. Links should be in Signature. Better put those 2 links there. :)

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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 01:07:54 PM »
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!

Loveitloveitloveit!

This really looks like a manga. Can't wait to read it.


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I just added you on dA and bought the app for my kindle. Can't wait to read it when I get home!
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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2013, 01:57:22 AM »
cdpoke no links allowed inside posts. Links should be in Signature. Better put those 2 links there. :)

oh oh sorry about that @w@

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!

Loveitloveitloveit!

This really looks like a manga. Can't wait to read it.


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I just added you on dA and bought the app for my kindle. Can't wait to read it when I get home!

waaaaaaaaa. thank you for purchasing T^T. I just added you also in dA!  :dance:
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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #6 on: January 30, 2013, 03:23:39 AM »
No problem. We try to keep things clean. You have an interesting story so don't forget to post couple pages in topic too. Link to full story can be kept in signature. :)

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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #8 on: February 06, 2013, 09:43:33 PM »
No problem. We try to keep things clean. You have an interesting story so don't forget to post couple pages in topic too. Link to full story can be kept in signature. :)

Yesh thank you. I'll keep my posts clean  :heart: will post some pictures...

It's cute! I like the design of the angels and demons-- it's kind of like that's part of them, and then also an accessory. Hope you do more~

There will be more. Thank you for liking them >//<
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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #9 on: February 06, 2013, 10:12:24 PM »
Oh oh >w< here's the 1st page at MangaMagazine. Hope you like it. @w@

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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #10 on: February 07, 2013, 07:30:27 PM »
Coin & Flour is super cute~
I am reading through it now!
In case you don't know, font choice in a comic is very important. Normally, comic and manga artists use a font that is all uppercase. It makes it a lot easier to read, which in turn makes the whole comic look more professional.
It might seem like a little thing to nit-pick, but font can make, or break, a comic. The script font you are using for most of the comic is hard to read, especially in the tiny speech bubbles you have.

I am going to use one of your pages for an example:


See how the dialogue from the elevator attendant jumps out at you? It does that because of the uppercase font.  I would encourage you to find a good uppercase font, and use it in the future. Or, even better, go though and change the font on your comic. You will notice a big difference.

If you need to find fonts, I recommend dafont.com



Make sure you modify your search for "Public Domain" and "Free" fonts. When you sell your comic (I think you should, it's awesome!) you want to avoid potential copyright issues.

Keep up the good work! I will be cheering you on! <3
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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2013, 02:30:06 PM »
Very very nice.
It isn't about how you play the game.
It is about how you allow the game to play you.

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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #12 on: February 12, 2013, 09:38:19 AM »
Coin & Flour is super cute~
I am reading through it now!
In case you don't know, font choice in a comic is very important. Normally, comic and manga artists use a font that is all uppercase. It makes it a lot easier to read, which in turn makes the whole comic look more professional.
It might seem like a little thing to nit-pick, but font can make, or break, a comic. The script font you are using for most of the comic is hard to read, especially in the tiny speech bubbles you have.

I am going to use one of your pages for an example:


See how the dialogue from the elevator attendant jumps out at you? It does that because of the uppercase font.  I would encourage you to find a good uppercase font, and use it in the future. Or, even better, go though and change the font on your comic. You will notice a big difference.

If you need to find fonts, I recommend dafont.com



Make sure you modify your search for "Public Domain" and "Free" fonts. When you sell your comic (I think you should, it's awesome!) you want to avoid potential copyright issues.

Keep up the good work! I will be cheering you on! <3
Yah you have a point there ^^;. But I'm projecting the demons and angels voices by the fonts, just like other subbed mangas. Demons have echoic demonic voices and echoic calm voices for the angels. The elevator operator is the only human so I gave her a manga font. Been thinking to change all the fonts to manga font coz we made a motion manga of it with voices but they didn't have echoic voices ^^; But overall you're right. I should done it for the first place OTL thank you for the tip.


Very very nice.

Arigatou @w@

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Seriously, this is brilliant, well done! You're immensely talented at manga, and i hope you get published one day!

I'm only a few pages in, but i love the overall concept so far, it's very childish, and if you play it right, could capture a large age-range for an audience!

-on a side note, drawing all of those letters must have been a pain-

WAA arigatou!!... @w@ Thank you for liking it. I already have a published manga distributed nation wide in our country but it's not Coin & Flour. XD About the letters it's very easy. I just draw a couple of letters then multiply and multiply it. XD lols
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Re: Coin & Flour
« Reply #13 on: March 01, 2013, 09:37:48 PM »
Hi and welcome to MR cdpoke-san (interesting choice for an account name) but i know who you really are!  :biggrin: creator of Coin and Flour, artist at Ohno-manga and Black ink comics with manga published nationwide.  Youre none other than my mentor and master, Power-J. so nice of you to join us here. ^ ^  :thumbsup:
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« Reply #14 on: March 28, 2013, 01:45:29 AM »
Hi and welcome to MR cdpoke-san (interesting choice for an account name) but i know who you really are!  :biggrin: creator of Coin and Flour, artist at Ohno-manga and Black ink comics with manga published nationwide.  Youre none other than my mentor and master, Power-J. so nice of you to join us here. ^ ^  :thumbsup:

Mastur Jeff! You were here!!  :heart: Waaah! You're the one who is my master!  The vreator of 300 Perfect Game!  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:

I just wanted to send you this as a heads up, but on page 3, Ch 2 there is a dialogue error!

http://page.images.mangamagazine.net/68341/original.jpg?Expires=1360712731&Signature=M-7dAK8Tz2TttqO-7AyhgjnI8M2pEakTGbxUbtwjSF3zIngPYVUuvglXjbPAUFySETufSYAJSoWWcwBT3XVa-I6l7WmsHQcpZdGkcD4iKZjJLaMqJa9v1BL7-BAp0zhTo0qJnbG-NGE~Fqb~iqYZdrjP-izluYVfW-D3RpMRw6c_&Key-Pair-Id=APKAJ6UCEOEF3JOXRZVA

I think she should say "You" instead of "For"?

Also, this needs to continue! It's such high quality, and your art is brilliant!!!!

Woah! Thank you for correcting. Will be revising it soon!  :heart: and thank you for the compliment  :blush:


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