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Author Topic: 24 pages in 24 hours  (Read 4468 times)

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Offline TomBombadil

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Re: 24 pages in 24 hours
« Reply #15 on: November 17, 2014, 08:06:17 AM »
you drew things out pretty nicely. i will say though that the dialogue needs work. a little too forced in certain areas. such as.

"She's lying. I've known her for so long. that's how i know"


her crying looks alittle too comedic too. but of course its all moving too fast.

I really liked it and enjoyed the efficiency and speed which you did this. It is definitely interesting for such a short time frame, my only criticism is the above. I found her hand placement during the crying made it seem comical, which is not what you were going for. Other than that impressive work.

Also sorry for Necroing this was just really good :p.

Offline Wielder84

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Re: 24 pages in 24 hours
« Reply #16 on: December 08, 2014, 08:14:37 AM »
Sleep man! Rest your eyes! Working fast is necessary in this field but not at the cost of quality. Your pages done when you were alert look good but unfinished. Keep it up.

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Re: 24 pages in 24 hours
« Reply #17 on: December 10, 2014, 02:02:28 PM »
*applause and whistles*