Story wasn't that well done either, it would atleast 30 pages to tell it properly. :l
Though I think that, even though it was a manga, more dialogue would've done it more justice, I think I emphasised too much on the idea of having as little dialogue as possible and it evoked confusion in readers, plus its a rom-com not a battle manga.
Also, since prair-kun didn't have a lot of dialogue,even though he got the majority, it made the readers unfamiliar with the character.
The story as a whole didn't flow really well, I need to work on that. -_-
I think that some of the biggest problems with the art was I didn't really pay any attention to anatomy cuz I was lazy, and also the fact that I put too much detail in the wrong places also screwed the whole thing pretty badly.
But anyway, I can guarantee that my future manga's will be insanely better than that of this, no doubt about it. But I didn't regret doing this cuz the experience was most valuable