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Author Topic: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost  (Read 5926 times)

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Offline kinre

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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #15 on: July 29, 2012, 01:32:59 PM »
 well.... hmmmm..
what you had say are mostly right. only the detail is a bit off.
as i don't want to give people a hentai feeling so i had  try to make it more... well you know.
so over all is what nyxy say.
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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #16 on: July 30, 2012, 06:33:43 AM »
I agree with Nyxy. Its just a side story and its fun. Coryn u can think of it like an episode of a show, where each episode is different than the other and has a dfferent setting etc...

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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #17 on: August 09, 2012, 02:49:57 PM »
I told this story to my wife very quickly, she immediately wanted to see it. She was chuckling like the silly (but cute) thing she is.

Kinre, you got two fans.

Now, as to the long haired woman, she could be gender-less (ghosts don't have any use for genitals - lol - only in anime they may have some lol). But yes, I thought it was a guy. Whatever the gender though, I do not think it impact the story by much.

Loved the personalities of the ghosts though: the younger one (short hair) is a klutz!!!! The long haired, so bossy and having her plans shattered (literally) by the other one.

Keep it up.

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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #18 on: August 10, 2012, 04:50:23 AM »
I  see ,maybe i will make a 2nd chap of this 2 ghost ,after i done the 1 i am doing now.
Not too sure if people like the story i am makeing now though cause is not a fun story.
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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #19 on: August 10, 2012, 07:43:09 AM »
I liked the story overall it was cute ^_^.

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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #21 on: August 10, 2012, 11:58:18 AM »
lol I just thought it was one of those (many) effeminate chars not uncommon in mangas lolololol

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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #22 on: August 12, 2012, 11:00:56 AM »
very nice ^^  ;)
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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #23 on: August 12, 2012, 01:20:04 PM »
oh thx.
your first post had given to me lol
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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #24 on: August 12, 2012, 05:28:53 PM »
hhhh yeah
as i told u ..i like ur  work
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Re: kinre short story : a house and 2 ghost
« Reply #25 on: August 12, 2012, 05:42:54 PM »
Welcome to MR raditz :D why don't u introduce urself in the welcome center and let us learn more about u ;)