Inhuman

[Coach Fro]

In 2015, a peaceful city known as New Angel was soon turned into living nightmare, when a unidentified black meteor crashed into the city. Surprisingly, many people survived the explosion, but at a cost. Those who survived gained supernatural powers and abilities far beyond human comprehension. However, many who gained these new-found powers lost control over themselves and became blood thirsty savages. Thus, the people of Angel New began killing each other. The city of New Angel has now become the city of Inhumans....

This is a part of the background history for my manga Inhuman. The reason why i didnt write the whole thing is because im still in the mist of finishing it up. Also im still trying to figure out a good a plot that will keep people interested and its getting kind of hard for me to come up with ideas for characters. So uh...... What do you think? Was it good or bad and please be honest.

[[aero]]

too general for us to tell honestly, sounds like Needless to me with only this small snippet (im sure it isnt but you should get the point im making)

[Coach Fro]

Yeah I get your point. I felt like I should start throwing my ideas out there but I guess I should just wait until I get everything together first then start posting my ideas. Thanks aero!

[Coryn]

basically what aero said. can't say much here. and honestly we can't help you until you start throwing out your ideas. and getting feedback on what you already have will help you get ideas for the next parts.

[Coach Fro]

Thanks for the advice. but i have one question. Since im going to redo this and add more to it, what exactly should I include that would interest you? 

[Coryn]

well that's hard to say. you have to ask yourself what you think will be interesting. if we tell you what to add it starts becoming less and less your story

[Coach Fro]

True, but I wasnt really asking you what my story should include. What I meant was how much content should I give out? I dont want to give out a long drawn out back story that would bore people to death. Im just trying to find ways to explain the back story of my manga in a interesting way without putting people to sleep. I guess the answer will come to me sooner or later.

[Coryn]

well it's better to cut to much than too little. if you give us all of the big background we can help you cut it down to where it needs to be. plus help you present it in a way that isn't boring.

[Coach Fro]

Okay Ill have up the full backstory for Inhuman in a few days. Knowing me, this might take a while....