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Author Topic: The way to hell (new manga)  (Read 6504 times)

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Offline Hasith

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Re: The way to hell (new manga)
« Reply #15 on: July 03, 2011, 12:26:16 PM »
Well I'm not sure if this topic should be moved to Members Manga board or merge with your other topic in Manga Art Gallery.

So what should I do ?  :ninja:


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Re: The way to hell (new manga)
« Reply #16 on: July 03, 2011, 02:51:20 PM »
i thought there was a place for drawn manga stories to go?
oh that is members manga......yeah i would put it there if i was me which i am but you aren't :P
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Re: The way to hell (new manga)
« Reply #17 on: July 05, 2011, 04:24:48 PM »
Sorry for such a long absence here are next 3 pages CRITIQUES are more than welcome :)






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Re: The way to hell (new manga)
« Reply #18 on: July 06, 2011, 07:46:13 AM »
i didn't mention this before, but i like the way you draw your hair, its much more complicated than a lot of manga. i think it would be a good idea to check your spelling and grammar, there were a few things that didn't seem quite right, that might be me though but ill mention them anyway:
first page - should be "we just wanna take him back to where he belongs", don't have the "to" at the end
third page - i'm not sure what you are trying to say, my guess it should be "he OWES us SOMETHING"
you might wanna check with us before you write it as spelling mistakes can make the manga seem less "wow" if you get what i mean.
hope that helps, i also like the way you have drawn eyes, lots of feeling in them!
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Re: The way to hell (new manga)
« Reply #19 on: July 06, 2011, 02:41:50 PM »
Thank You for replaying and analysing everytime i post new pages! I appriciate that :) Oh , yes i completly forgot to chceck my english grammar Im gonna pay close attention to it now :)

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Re: The way to hell (new manga)
« Reply #20 on: July 06, 2011, 04:53:07 PM »
thats good to hear! you could always post it here to double check if you arn't sure, and that could also be a preview of the pages!
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Re: The way to hell (new manga)
« Reply #21 on: July 25, 2011, 12:59:05 AM »
yay! new updates?! been waiting for it... though i cant see the pages (internet security at offices blocks the images)

but i will look at the new pages and modify this comment as soon as i get home!   :thumbsup:

update: just got home! first thing i did was to keep my promise!

AWESOME!!! pure awesome! i love the improvements im seeing here! and the scene is getting more interesting with every page. great job with the inking.  :thumbsup:

cant wait for the update..
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