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Offline Lambo-san

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Metal Reaver
« on: June 21, 2011, 10:34:47 PM »
 :sheep: Hello All! I'm back, I;ve been away for far too long. My computer has been broken for a very long time, and because of that I haven't been able to get on until now, I have an old replacement one. Problem is, I cannot use Manga Studio anymore so my manga is untoned and bleak.   :(

This story contains the genre of: Adventure, Action, Drama, Comedy [but not yet XP]

The first page was on my broken PC so I had to retrieve it from Facebook but its size is reduced. Sorry~

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Right now 5 pages can't explain the story so hold questions please. XD

Comment if you'd like I really would like it no matter if its bad or good  :biggrin:

Also if anyone has  good experience with Manga Studio I'd appreciate it if you save my pictures
and tone them, and clean them up and you can even reword the text and stuff too I'd love that!



« Last Edit: July 12, 2011, 12:33:40 PM by Lambo-san »
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Re: Metal Reaver
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2011, 12:40:53 AM »
well your art's definitely gotten better. good to see you back on the site

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Re: Metal Reaver
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2011, 11:43:24 AM »
Woo, lambo-kun is back on track! And this story seems interesting. Keep em coming!
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Re: Metal Reaver
« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2011, 05:15:17 PM »
Page 6 is up its short but it took 2 hours lol!

Thanks Coryn, Its probably gotten better because of my art teacher who helped me improve on what I know :D

and to Toasty, yesI  will keep it coming >:D


::: There is a weird problem with the image being too wide even though i reduced it like 5 times so remember to use the scrolling bar underneath page 6 please XD :::
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« Last Edit: June 22, 2011, 07:09:34 PM by Lambo-san »
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Re: Metal Reaver
« Reply #4 on: June 24, 2011, 01:49:36 PM »
I fixed page 1 and re-upload it so its bigger and the text is better but the tones are gone ): I'm working on page 7, 8 and 9 and will post them when all are finished.
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Re: Metal Reaver
« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2011, 08:05:14 PM »
I posted 7 and 8 but I was so lazy they look just horrible XD whatever...
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Re: Metal Reaver
« Reply #6 on: July 02, 2011, 11:46:15 PM »
Nice drawings but I recomend to not scan it in black and white, because the ink will look rough ( if you used ink) I recommend to scan it normally and then in a software clean your manga pages and add tones.
I hope it helps you ;D :sheep: