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Re: my pic again
« Reply #600 on: December 29, 2012, 03:35:44 AM »
on 2nd pic, Your character legs is too short. Watch out, Nyosan.
But I really like 1st pic. Your composition is good.

Btw I saw a lot of improvement and better stuffs. You better in anatomy and look like you understanding about scale as well and better than before. Could I suggest you something? focus on hands and lags scale more.

Now you line are really good! Thanks for sharing : )

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Re: my pic again
« Reply #601 on: December 29, 2012, 04:34:16 AM »
to add to marche's tip on #2, i think the entire left leg could have been moved left a bit, making the hip stand out less, which i think is part of the problem proportionally. i think because of that the legs look too short :P
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Re: my pic again
« Reply #602 on: January 08, 2013, 09:33:18 PM »
thanks Marchie, yeah kinda understand now to make a good proportion but still make some mistake when do it
and now i still try to make good proportion , and yeah now kinda improved a little than before  ;D

yeah Suuperi will try to do that at other drawing but still to think the leg would look short, look like still need more practice to draw the bottom

alright now i will post some pic that have been requested from some MR member at skype now will post it :3

this pic requested by Ryuuji , he requested me to draw owl girl but instead i drew this with owl feather


this drawing requested by fleet hope she will like it, to draw a nekoboy


and this is have been requested to draw hatsune miku by mike junge. and for now this is the only request drawing i do for the nest i will post it later
and this is just environment sketch that i do in a free time


ok that's all for now and if there any mistake in the drawing feel free to comment and have a nice day everyone :)
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Re: my pic again
« Reply #603 on: January 09, 2013, 02:30:18 AM »
wow great hatsune miku one, cant find much wrong with that one.
the neko boy, most is ok but the face is a bit out, not too sure but either the jawline is wrong or theres something with the eyes, just looks like the face is too big for the head, like the features are too spread out.
the owl one is also very good, i liked all the feather details you added :P
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Re: my pic again
« Reply #604 on: January 09, 2013, 05:23:25 AM »
Nyosan!!! Darn you've gotten so good. How goes the manga?

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Re: my pic again
« Reply #605 on: January 10, 2013, 10:31:10 PM »
*walks in*
Oooh~ very nice
*sees Miku drawing*
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« Reply #606 on: January 11, 2013, 02:27:08 AM »
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wow great hatsune miku one, cant find much wrong with that one.
the neko boy, most is ok but the face is a bit out, not too sure but either the jawline is wrong or theres something with the eyes, just looks like the face is too big for the head, like the features are too spread out.
the owl one is also very good, i liked all the feather details you added :P

thanks man yeah i though something wrong too at the face of the nekoboy maybe i will edited it in digital if fleet ask me to do that :P

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Nyosan!!! Darn you've gotten so good. How goes the manga?
thanks Lego my friend, well it tto the practice that i always do and for the manga i still struggling for the map and the environment design that i need to collect so i will need some time to make it, if i don't want long time hiatus =_=

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*walks in*
Oooh~ very nice
*sees Miku drawing*
o . o
*stabs self in eyes because nothing will be better looking than that*
   

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Re: my pic again
« Reply #607 on: January 12, 2013, 12:27:20 PM »
And you say you need improvement... Hmm Hmm

But no seriously Nyo you did a hell of job this time around man. I'm extremely impressed. I would try to point the errors but in all honesty I really cant find any mistakes in your art. I'll leave that to the pros.

Great job bro! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :clapping:
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Re: my pic again
« Reply #608 on: January 13, 2013, 02:09:05 PM »
The drawings are pretty good! Keep working on the  shading  on the last pic!

Keep drawing!

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Re: my pic again
« Reply #609 on: January 27, 2013, 03:20:05 AM »
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And you say you need improvement... Hmm Hmm

But no seriously Nyo you did a hell of job this time around man. I'm extremely impressed. I would try to point the errors but in all honesty I really cant find any mistakes in your art. I'll leave that to the pros.

Great job bro! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :clapping:
well, yeah i need more improvement if i can haha since i want to make my drawing better than now, well what i need just inspiration and practice
but still thanks for liking my  drawing Fro  ;D :biggrin:

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The drawings are pretty good! Keep working on the  shading  on the last pic!

Keep drawing!
thanks Cory to take a look at my drawing, and yeah i will shade the last one later
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and now i will updated some drawing
another drawing that requested by zeal Black Rock Shooter

i'm sorry for bad poses choices and wrong anatomy =_= well, at least i'm trying


requested by secretsoda/zach character from "it's not my fault that i'm not popular" manga, i'm sorry zach if it doesn't go well with your liking


environment requested by pedro, i'm sorry pedro if the mood of the pic doesn't too creepy =_=


original character design named Dylan

environment design concept, i don't why i make this well whatever as long as it will be good in the future

and i don't have any idea why i drew this either

Teyna City Design, for my manga that i prepare, though now the design became more vivid than before

alright this is environment design from before that using 2 point perspective, now a clean inking i will do the shading later

alright that's all for now i hope you enjoy my drawing, have a nice day and see ya later  :dance:
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Re: my pic again
« Reply #610 on: January 27, 2013, 05:09:05 AM »
Whoa. I don't even know where to start. These are great designs nyosan! The environments are all the more stunning, wish those pics were bigger though

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Re: my pic again
« Reply #611 on: January 27, 2013, 02:19:17 PM »
Oh hey Nyo! Nice work on my request, I really liked it :D
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Re: my pic again
« Reply #612 on: January 27, 2013, 03:33:10 PM »
*Nearly flips out at the Tomoko*
You drew her~ =w= So glad Zach requested that. The rest of your drawings are awesome too. Especially the background concept art. All look amazing.
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« Reply #613 on: January 27, 2013, 03:51:24 PM »
Nyo-sama. You would not believe how much I love you right now. You put so much time into them. I couldn't be happier!  :heart:

BRS looks amazing, regardless of whatever mistakes you see (which I cannot seem to find. Maybe the hand holding the sword is a little to "uniform" on the knuckles?).

Also, you're doing a great job on the environmental drawings. The Teyna City Design is fantastic.

Just a quick question for you as well, if you don't mind, but what is your method for sketching and getting ideas out quickly?
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Re: my pic again
« Reply #614 on: January 29, 2013, 01:47:49 AM »
amazing, amazing, amazing... great fan arts id say. and youre making a manga, you say? well let me know when i can read it, okay. you are amazing.  :clapping:
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