Lookin' good! I love how the blue lighting moves all... weird in the first one. For the second one, I must say that Sai wasn't able to do lighting yet when he was in the real world. If he's ever going to go back... I'm not telling. Anyhow, I'm honored that anyone is actually willing to do fanart of MY story. That gets my hopes up, and my inspiration back to finish the chapter.
Furthermore, I love the color of the first one's jacket, although it's supposed to be more black than red. But I can think about it.
What amazed me is that you picked the exact same color I was thinking of for the clothes under the jacket. Like, exactly the same.
Also, I loved the text it said in the first one.
Edit: I simplified that one too much. He actually WAS able to do the lighting in the real world, only he had no idea of the existance of his pentagram.