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Re: Blessed (Temp Title)
« Reply #15 on: May 16, 2010, 12:31:15 AM »
yah, that makes sens

not sure about the controversy though

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Re: Blessed (Temp Title)
« Reply #16 on: May 16, 2010, 12:35:20 AM »
I may allude to some, but only when a major god has to be faced, and no Allah, just how it'll be so I won't die any time soon.

For the title, you guys think "Altar" would work? It doesn't sound very correct for the story though...
Arcane Judgement - Chapter 5 END (Now being reworked):
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=2972.0

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Re: Blessed (Temp Title)
« Reply #17 on: May 16, 2010, 12:37:29 AM »
altar is even more religious then mine O_o

aside from that it.. seems more drama ish?

i dunno...

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Re: Blessed (Temp Title)
« Reply #18 on: May 16, 2010, 12:53:54 AM »
If you want to "divorce" a little bit from the gods being the main viewpoint seek for a title less "religious".

I recommend looking perhaps for a human emotion or verb, and start from there.

You have the classic ones like Redemption, Judgment, Freewill and so goes on.

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Re: Blessed (Temp Title)
« Reply #19 on: May 16, 2010, 12:55:43 AM »
haha Paladin terms XD

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Re: Blessed (Temp Title)
« Reply #20 on: May 16, 2010, 01:05:25 AM »
Zeus V. Jesus!
Ultimate smack-fight-brawl duel!
Were going to party like it's 1986/ Blow in the cartridge and get ya' fix./

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Re: Blessed (Temp Title)
« Reply #21 on: May 16, 2010, 01:28:03 AM »
Changing the title, I figured I'd name it Arcane Judgement now, it's the name I'm sticking with and I'll explain so when I write up chapter one...or when somebody asks, I'll change the topic title once I remember how...
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Re: Arcane Judgement
« Reply #22 on: May 16, 2010, 01:31:59 AM »
ooh arcane

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Re: Arcane Judgement
« Reply #23 on: May 16, 2010, 01:35:05 AM »
Yes, and if possible, I will explain why "Arcane" before my parents try to make me sleep.

I figured since the use of the powers bestowed upon blessed people are similar to the way a mage uses spells and magic, why not "Arcane"? Of course some sort of cleric reference may fit better, but it's more of a battle story so healing wouldn't fit too well. The Judgement thing was just to add in a part for the god aspect of the story.
Arcane Judgement - Chapter 5 END (Now being reworked):
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Re: Arcane Judgement
« Reply #24 on: May 16, 2010, 01:37:14 AM »
hmm, makes sense to me

though saying it judgement seems a bit forced (prolly cause i play wow and arcane is for mages and judgement is for paladins)

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Re: Arcane Judgement
« Reply #25 on: May 16, 2010, 01:41:43 AM »
I think the title now works well enough, it'll feel more natural once some of the story is written.
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Re: Arcane Judgement
« Reply #26 on: May 16, 2010, 01:47:28 AM »
allrighty

write it

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Re: Arcane Judgement
« Reply #27 on: May 16, 2010, 11:23:44 AM »
It'll be days before the first chapter is out I'm pretty sure, so keep up that waiting as I await 2PM so I can make too many egg rolls.
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Re: Arcane Judgement
« Reply #28 on: May 16, 2010, 11:47:48 AM »
Ah, Litt's fantasy. Can't wait.

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Re: Arcane Judgement
« Reply #29 on: May 16, 2010, 11:48:55 AM »
xDD Haha
I was kind of shocked when I saw a thread called "Arcane Judgement" made by you.
Thought you made another story. I was like "Geez. O.o"

But awesome.. likin' the new name. Way better. More catchier.. more rememberable.