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Infernity (by Natsu)
« on: March 12, 2023, 06:49:24 PM »
Infernity: In a world half destroyed by the last holy war angels and demons are aiming to improve their relationship through the heaven-hell parity law. We will met and follow the adventures of Akari and Ishiki, a pair of angel/demon teenagers forced to convive by the law.

This was originally planned as a 48 page throwaway one shoot manga but ended becoming longer and longer when i wrote it down. The story in the first 7 chapters covers the contents of the original one shoot.

Here is the full first volume (read left to rigth):














































































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Re: Infernity (by Natsu)
« Reply #1 on: March 13, 2023, 12:21:34 PM »
Writing things down always seem to make things grow in unexpected ways, haha. It's a simpler premise (as befits a one shot), but you've got a story there. Good job in sticking to it!

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Re: Infernity (by Natsu)
« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2023, 05:19:46 AM »
ooohhh very nice finally read it all :D
the flow of the story is great, a cool setting with the demon angel pairing.
shame it ended on a cliffhanger I would definitely like to read more!!!!
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Re: Infernity (by Natsu)
« Reply #3 on: March 20, 2023, 11:52:56 AM »
If youre expecting volume 2 i have good news, we will be reading more about akari and ishiki in volumes 3 and onward as the story will continue.

The volumes 2 and onward will be posted in a chapter by chapter schedule here at MR once i decide some minor details and finish writting the story.

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Re: Infernity (by Natsu)
« Reply #4 on: March 20, 2023, 06:03:32 PM »
ah epic
I thought you meant you had ended at that point the way you phrased the OP but I must've misread.
awesome, can't wait for more then :D
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Re: Infernity (by Natsu)
« Reply #5 on: March 20, 2023, 06:42:30 PM »
ah epic
I thought you meant you had ended at that point the way you phrased the OP but I must've misread.
awesome, can't wait for more then :D

Yup, you somehow misread it. Chapters 5, 6 & 7 are written but not drawn in case a new plot twist gets introduced while i plan the following arcs.

It does not seems the case this time.