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Ikkitousen
« on: May 10, 2022, 12:46:06 AM »
Literature meaning A Mighty Knight Who Matches a Thousand Knights where can I find literature like to compromise my own and make something different
Like rowing a boat, we enter the future backwards. All we see are the scenes of the past, and no one cannot see the views of tomorrow
Coryn, MK and Suuper-san helped me out I wish there were more people like them
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I sacrifice my future to rewrite my past

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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2022, 01:21:33 AM »
Since I plan to write a manga, I take a lot of inspiration from my favourite manga.

Do you have any sort of story idea you're working on yet?
Like what genre etc
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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #2 on: May 10, 2022, 08:25:40 AM »
Well Idk what I'm making I'm thinking of a scholomance grave yard for the beginning of the story
and a sewer dungeon so this would mean a historical underworld underground

Me and MK just made about 3 chapters he said he would be back around June he had things to do
so I have to wait in the mean time still waiting for library books I already have about 8888
google docs I await for his arrival I don't know what I'm making but

I'm thinking of this but doesn't have to exactly like this short story I'm posting v

short story don't judge me it's my life story grade 4
Grade 4 - until now

met ms.bell discovered zatch bell and anime played tag and four square with friends joke alot
my behaviour and wasn't proper even with people wasn't really fitting in even before but made a friend

Went to a special needs school met friends joked around watch malcolm in the middle and became a bully
with friends because there was this thing called the yellow note if you get 3 strikes for a yellow note
your very bad if you do your a goodie two shoes I got peer pressure and showed my true colors
and joke around but yeah there was some zatch bell moments little fighter 2 addict that time

Junior High Trying to figure out my life and what I wanted, got attacked in the bathroom and with friends
my friend parents were divored the mom had a affair, in social media there was a lot of stress in involved
and none of knew which of any of us were friends and then I was hospitalise also social media drama
"for here on in our lives are just going to get much more worse"
Psychosis, Mental Breakdown, Mental Retardation
lost of speech couldn't put sentences together

sent to the hospital fantasing about anime in the bed

High School there was people getting arrested and drama also was spending time in the forums of little fighter 2
talking to my friends about projects but later on in the future I planned to gave up

We went to dairy queen and me and some weeb my little pony friends went to comic con then
I bought a good luck charm for myself the yu yu hakusho Mazoku card
dorking around

Worked on my improvement and mental health like resume and idk

Had drama with psychiatrist and found a job got scammed $3000 dollars because of family problems
and some people who pissed me off working and watched violent movies trying to
articulate writing and checking wikia studying and getting
saved informaton on discord saving my stuff too

T&T market right by a ware house to pack groceries the environment for some characters

Found work working in a ware house

equipment loan program been less stress

that time full of worries I want the skill to not worry about anything

simplying my life much more as well

focusing on mental health and not socialising a have a few friends who help me meet other friends

resting and relaxing and therapy

Wanted to have postive communcation skills and to laugh and enjoy life and not be twisted in the head

my dad doesn't feel that way and he can handle stress not feeling any problem his enjoying life

ALSO BEEN TRYING TO HIT THE GYM

could be about deja vu moments /  seven high schools take place in a turf war for territorial supremacy
basically when elementary hits and there's social media they build up there popularity and
during junior high around that range they pick on the weaker ones

quadrant zone property 100k

The complex conflict between himself and all those who try to stop or help him /
(Wicked step blank and a number of jealous step blanks, Cinderella movie for example,
Bertholdt and Reiner, Askeladd and Thorfinn, Gon and Pitou who knows check these videos here)
- Noli me tangere (Touch Me Not) By Jose Rizal , El filibusterismo , 1620,
battleship island to elaborate basically just like the villains like yu yu hakusho and the dark tournament characters,
red ribbon army from dragon ball and rokkaku police + Hayashi from jsrf wikia check these wikia /
Blank is cruel and ruthless, and shows no mercy to enemies and allies alike.
Initially, he showed no emotion when his subordinates died and only saw them as disposable tools to help him gain the title of blank /
tons of people like this especially starting off with Janvier / incarnations of Janvier /
Blank was always handed the most important or decisive tasks in blank past battles most dangerous one in the group /
One man more confident with a small unit than a big unit for a personal job / Side Unit /
sympathy for mr vengeance review, corpus christi review, once upon a time in high school review,
a dirty carnival review, beyond evil review, the law of ueki episode 33 review,
death note review the elements and setting I have 2 notes for organisation and
society to talk about basically the over world instead of what happens below the over world
basically high school in over world is drama and street fighting who knows what

this school is your last chance if trash like yourselves can't keep up with the academic
ability of regular students this is it if you can't live a decent social life
you end up here and if you screw up here it's the end of the road

Each time Da Yi uses his powers like transforming into a boar for example he loses a year of his life check out the law of ueki robert hayden wikia
Granted each single type weapon until he used up his life timeline until his very last straw of death. Growth Pain and life slowly decease

can I private message you the bio of my character cause I'm confuse with what the hell I've been making since 2018 I have a bunch of discord post I have to go through with MK and some gallery pictures in my phone to talk about

Is it totally fine to talk about my writing here with you guys no one gonna screw around with me
I was thinking of uploading my character description and getting feedback but need to remodel
my story with MK oh yeah what could the story possibly need what am I missing

still need to practise drawing been having a daily planner ever since plus need a lot of feedback
I only have action animation and MK on my google docs to talk about this

There like the only 2 I trust with my story I don't know if I can find another or 2 to actually trust
« Last Edit: May 10, 2022, 08:44:21 AM by evand498 »
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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #3 on: May 10, 2022, 08:33:55 AM »
also thinking about Ming Dynasty, one piece and china or Idk thinking about middle kingdom stuff
suppose to be a western world feudal fairy tale. I don't what a story can be missing but I got
like about a organizations list and figuring out world building and society yes I'm struggling
and I feel like this is the only story I want to make it's this and life skills plus saving money

I don't want a dark world story want something more like rurouni kenshin or idk
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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #4 on: May 10, 2022, 04:14:38 PM »
sometimes you don't have to create a unique world, but rather create a relatable world with one unique feature. Such as Gintama = "Samurai era, but with aliens". Having an era or genre that people recognize immediately can really help with world building as your audience already "know" a lot from their previous experience from watching similar genres.

I'm OK with you messaging me to discuss things but I won't always be able to answer right away as I'm very busy a lot of the time. I'm also not too great with reviewing writing as I don't read very much.
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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2022, 11:55:43 PM »
Thanks you guys helped me in my lowest and darkest times in my life I don't know what I would do with out you guys in real life I have trust issues I don't trust anyone but my online friends because I want to re shape my thinking more and more the truth is my mind goes 100 times a mile an hour I don't know who to talk to or who to trust I don't even go to church because it's confusing I have a few people to trust. Like coryn said I just have to flow with the situation I have to hang out with people with similar taste and different thinking been struggling with that I don't even know if I should study a new language I have so much time to myself after work and volunteering what do I do??
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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #6 on: May 11, 2022, 11:01:07 AM »
I think a very important step is understanding yourself, your limits, your strengths and weaknesses, and how to deal with your weak points so that they don't cause you trouble. I personally have trouble getting to sleep on time so to help with that I set timers to remind me to start winding down, and another for when I should actually be in bed.

It might help looking at the best points in your life and saying "what happened differently to make it good?", and the same with the negative times "what caused me to feel so negative?". Sometimes just a small negative feeling can snowball into a depressive episode. But catching it early and consciously rejecting it can help to start recovering immediately.
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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2022, 07:37:35 PM »
yeah I have voices in my head I have psychosis and taking Risperidone! I have stuff I want to do so I go to my computer and my studies are there even in discord and google docs I go sight seeing I go around places I check out places like walmart check inside and I hate all the stuff that's in there I go to my room and am a minimalist
I have to focus on getting well like fitness and driving to work and saving money and finally feeling good about myself which I haven't yet
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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #8 on: May 13, 2022, 10:05:19 AM »
ah right, yeah that sounds pretty awful. Having a condition like that can definitely make it harder to focus on things. Make sure to follow the doctor's advice which it sounds like you're doing, keep it up.

Sometimes we can set too high goals for ourselves like "I won't feel good about myself until I've published a book" or something very large, sometimes we need smaller goals that are easily achievable like "I'm going to write for 10 minutes each day", and each small accomplishment can contribute to our well-being and self-confidence.
Or we can punish ourselves too hard for not reaching the goals, "I'm a horrible person for not being able to draw today", and that's also destructive.

I personally find it useful to have a routine that doesn't change every day (at least in some aspects, like mornings or evenings), so I always have some stability in what I expect to happen from day to day. Then you can go to sleep knowing what's going on the next day, which can help with productivity.
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Re: Ikkitousen
« Reply #9 on: May 13, 2022, 09:26:36 PM »
Writing by yourself and drawing is really hard that's why I need a coach to help me with my stuff
that's what MK doing for me so yeah it's really hard to do things alone
Like rowing a boat, we enter the future backwards. All we see are the scenes of the past, and no one cannot see the views of tomorrow
Coryn, MK and Suuper-san helped me out I wish there were more people like them
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I sacrifice my future to rewrite my past