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Author Topic: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1  (Read 1876 times)

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Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« on: January 06, 2022, 09:49:59 AM »
Hi I am not a professional by all means, although I have been developing a story for more than 7 years and currently working on some of the characters. My goal are to finish a comic strip of my entire story sorry I know it will take me some time. But  nonetheless, I plan on working on it I will be posting pictures and ideas that I'm working on as I move forward. Also, I wanted to join a community like this one for a very long time but I never thought about looking for it so I why not give this a shot now here I am and I hope you guys like it thank you for your time. - G.N.D
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2022, 09:55:44 AM »
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« Last Edit: January 06, 2022, 12:06:26 PM by Coryn »
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2022, 12:12:16 PM »
Welcome to MR Xseos! Sorry, but I had to delete your links. We don't allow link posting until you've made 25 posts (to control spam). But even then, we prefer if you link images directly to the forum. Both to control spam (again), but also so you're topic is as engaging as possible. Nobody likes following mystery links after all.

It's great that you want to be part of the community though! I suggest making a topic for yourself in the Welcome Center so people can get to know you a little better! And since you might not be familiar with small forum culture, know that the best way to get people to check our your work is to review other people's work first. What you put in comes back, I promise.

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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2022, 07:55:45 PM »
So sorry if I caused an inconvenience, I will read more about the rules and share my thoughts with others and their work. Thank you so much for understanding.
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2022, 02:56:56 PM »
No worries. I'm plenty used to it, lol. Like I said though, we encourage direct embeds at all times. So don't feel like you have to wait to share your work.

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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2022, 10:49:49 AM »
No worries. I'm plenty used to it, lol. Like I said though, we encourage direct embeds at all times. So don't feel like you have to wait to share your work.

I don't know how to do Embeds it's so confusing to me T_T...
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2022, 02:17:07 PM »
No worries. I'm plenty used to it, lol. Like I said though, we encourage direct embeds at all times. So don't feel like you have to wait to share your work.

I don't know how to do Embeds it's so confusing to me T_T...

Maybe this works now
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #7 on: January 08, 2022, 03:20:22 PM »
Looks good!
Using graph paper isn't actually such a bad idea as you can see quickly if you're not drawing something upright or symmetrical.
Keep it up!
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2022, 03:38:34 PM »
Looks good!
Using graph paper isn't actually such a bad idea as you can see quickly if you're not drawing something upright or symmetrical.
Keep it up!

 Thank you so much! Would it be ok for me to post other pictures in this manner without getting it removed?
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2022, 03:48:15 PM »
Ogre Commander face draft and idea, i dont know how to change the size hope this is not a problem....

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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #10 on: January 09, 2022, 01:34:36 AM »
I just wanted to say I really like the details of the skin on the ogre's face and ears.

The size looks fine on my screen, but if you wanted to adjust it you can just change the width and height in the code:
[img width=800 height=905]
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #11 on: January 09, 2022, 04:56:15 AM »
Yes, posting images like this is pretty much how we do it around here :D
Any large image will be shrunk to the forum width when you post it, but otherwise do as froggy says with the [img] code
Awesome ogre, love the detail on the skin and sharpness of the lines!
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #12 on: January 09, 2022, 12:05:08 PM »
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« Reply #13 on: January 09, 2022, 08:47:19 PM »
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Re: Xseos "The Lone Raven" - Book 1
« Reply #14 on: January 10, 2022, 12:25:51 PM »
Very nice artwork Xseos! About how long have you been at it? You mentioned working on this story for 8 years, but how long have you been drawing.

PS: if you have a really big image (or just a lot of them), you can generate spoiler tags when writing your post. All of our tools live just above the smilies. So for instance, the spoiler tags are the "Sp" tool. Image tags are the little Mona Lisa icon. So on and so forth. Just put whatever you want between the tags and you'll get your desired result. Same process for fonts, bold, italics, slash throughs, etc, etc, etc.

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