hai, arigatou gozaimasu! otagai ni ganbarimashou! suuper-san no nihongo ojyozu desu ne!
ehehehe doumo
anata no kanji wa kirei desu yo ~ kanji ni kyoumi ga arimasu ka?
It's a race! lol
ahaha go for it :P
what do you use to host your images, if you don't mind sharing?
I use imgur. it's a bit annoying since to keep the images in order I have to upload one at a time, but that's only dragging the file over, waiting 5 seconds and moving the next one.
(incidentally you can right click any image and view in new window/tab, and see the host address in the URL)
I think you're right! I think there are two moments when he thinks about what happened to prior to waking up. One moment is when he thinks about his senpai, "did we fall?" but it makes his head hurt so he focuses on finding a way out instead. I might need few more moments like that to really sell it. I'm also playing around with a one page intro where it drops few more hints... what do you think?
I re-read and I completely missed your explanation page, probably partly because the handwriting was a bit tough to read I might have skipped it ehehehe. That being the case I think there's enough explanation for now, and reveal more bit by bit as you want. I miss details a lot so do point it out to me :P
also I only just realised but you're doing right to left format, I automatically assume that english comics are left-to-right (as many people do for my japanese-style formatted manga), and so that might have messed with my comprehension. (that's why on almost all of my comics I have a "read right to left!" warning :P)
chapter 2:
The "halt halt halt" reminded me of the scene in Wall-E, and so I heard it in the robot's voices.
very good action scenes and sequential movements between panels, loved the sumo landing failure and the points panel judge mushrooms.
very epic cliffhanger indeed, love the new character design.
man I wish I could compose as dynamic as that, my manga is just so dry ahaha