An interesting read! (Also: welcome to MR! I moved your topic to a more appropriate board).
The art is really good, and you can out together a fight that's fun to follow with the eye. I did find the setup a bit confusing though. The characters seem to be digital, talk about not being human, and can interact with human minds like they're a video game system. And yet the characters do act fully human, even before they realize that the candy was drugged. All in all who and what they are doesn't read super well.
The dialogue was also pretty heavy. I won't say it's bad, because it wasn't, but your characters are pretty talkative. When you're filling up half the page with dialogue, it's hard on the eye, and really bofs down the otherwise we'll paced action.
Overall though you're doing very well! I hope to see more from you soon!