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Author Topic: fcollot's gallery  (Read 6184 times)

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fcollot's gallery
« on: March 20, 2017, 12:05:10 PM »
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2017, 09:59:01 PM »
Is the character mad that she can't go to the mall? :tongue: that's what I'm reading from the face and body position. Teen angst  ;)

I don't know what the path function is but the hair lines look good. Overall quality is great. I noticed you used screen tones and grey scale. From my experience, I'm no illustrator btw, if you want the 100% manga look, only use screen tones or it will look too digital.

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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2017, 04:04:09 AM »
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2017, 12:21:23 PM »
I dropped by last night and couldn't think of what was bugging me about this work, so I didn't say anything then, but I think I've figured it out. It's the way her neck doesn't seem to align with the rest of her spine because it's like she's ducking her head out and down at the same time, making her neck seem longer than it theoretically should be with her head size and shoulder width. Everything else looked okay, except maybe the shoulder width because of this issue.

Hopefully that's actually useful and doesn't seem like I came here just to say something mean. The rest of it looking good is why I couldn't put my finger on it in the first place.
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2017, 01:14:45 PM »
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2017, 03:23:24 PM »
The toning on the sweater looks nice!

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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #6 on: March 22, 2017, 09:26:15 PM »
You've clearly gone to a lot of effort over it, but strictly speaking, you shouldn't need to define so many strands of hair like that.  Unless your character has dreads, it's perfectly fine to just pick out the main sections (like bangs, sides, back, etc.) and then maybe define a few strands on top of that to help it flow.  Especially when you're doing the back of the head, I mean, it's not the focal point, so why give yourself extra work?

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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #7 on: March 23, 2017, 03:20:49 AM »
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #8 on: March 23, 2017, 03:57:43 AM »
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #9 on: January 04, 2018, 10:42:46 AM »
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #10 on: January 04, 2018, 10:50:28 AM »
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #11 on: January 04, 2018, 03:28:04 PM »
The resolution is a little too high (even though it's already scaled 50% from the original image, but it's still to big). Maybe this small one is better for viewing:



Screen tones looks nice, good job. :)

Not sure why you didnt just replace the first one though

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« Reply #12 on: January 04, 2018, 03:39:03 PM »
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Re: fcollot's gallery
« Reply #13 on: January 04, 2018, 03:44:29 PM »
That's some nice improvement over the last image! Guess all that time off worked in your favor, huh.  Glad you're still around with us.

I can't say I have any crits on the screentoning choices, although I'd recommend using a program that isn't GIMP. There are other programs that have screentone brushes at least as downloads, and I'm not sure if GIMP allows for those kind of brush downloads. The overall product is nice, but I'd imagine you'd save yourself a lot of time.
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« Reply #14 on: January 04, 2018, 05:30:45 PM »
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