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boss art
« on: July 31, 2014, 06:12:48 PM »
clothes are messed up. hope you enjoy all criticism welcomed
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Re: boss art
« Reply #1 on: August 01, 2014, 12:22:27 AM »
You were getting the idea down nicely and used strong lines which is good but they need refining. You should probably just try to use references as much as possible.

Also, try to thin out the pencil lines a little more. Especially for the girl they get in the way of the drawing.

Nice, keep drawing!
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Re: boss art
« Reply #2 on: August 01, 2014, 05:24:25 AM »
Your anatomy is really coming on and I appreciate the detail you're putting into your work. The girl though could be a bit wider and I think you ruined the guy's palm, looks as if he had a tumb growing out of the bottom of it and although it's good you've done good with clothes folds, I think you need to study them a bit more.

Hope that helps.
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Re: boss art
« Reply #3 on: August 01, 2014, 10:00:07 AM »
Thanks guys I didn't use reference. I noticed the girl was to thin after inking andthe thumb thing u well study more my arm just now really healing and it started hurting so I got lazy I will do better.       
« Last Edit: August 01, 2014, 04:06:42 PM by bossx5 »
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Re: boss art
« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2014, 03:34:07 PM »
Faces look interesting, and it's nice that you're trying to draw the whole body. Hands and clothing need a little work but it's an improvement.

Oh yeh, Korean webtoons like Noblesse or God of Highschool have a fancy way of drawing trousers and the like. Check them out when you have time.

Which characters are these? Second dude makes me think of DBZ for some reason.
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Re: boss art
« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2014, 05:15:17 PM »
The second one is just older one I touched up and ill gladly check it out if it helps me thanks.  Here's another. 
« Last Edit: August 03, 2014, 12:15:30 PM by bossx5 »
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Re: boss art
« Reply #6 on: August 03, 2014, 08:52:31 PM »
Wow that's an improvement! The face and neck look well and the overall look isn't too bad. The wrinkles are still a bit too wrinkly though
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Re: boss art
« Reply #7 on: August 04, 2014, 09:10:11 AM »
So to many wrinkles.     
« Last Edit: August 12, 2014, 03:57:04 PM by bossx5 »
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Re: boss art
« Reply #8 on: August 06, 2014, 06:53:46 PM »
 :-\         diesike nomura early concept art
« Last Edit: August 18, 2014, 12:20:47 PM by bossx5 »
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Re: boss art
« Reply #9 on: August 19, 2014, 06:22:22 PM »
id say work on the inking alittle and try to add some shadeing
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Re: boss art
« Reply #10 on: August 20, 2014, 02:18:06 PM »
Will do here's another
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Re: boss art
« Reply #11 on: August 21, 2014, 06:05:37 PM »
A super saiyan girl huh, nice
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Re: boss art
« Reply #12 on: August 21, 2014, 06:45:35 PM »
Thanks I still can't get shadeing right and here's another Oct hiniko
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Re: boss art
« Reply #13 on: August 24, 2014, 01:27:20 PM »
This one turned out interestingly. Though the lower body needs some work
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Re: boss art
« Reply #14 on: August 24, 2014, 07:56:46 PM »
Thanks I still have along way to go to catch up to you guys. I decided to do a really draw here's the first   here's the redraw
« Last Edit: August 27, 2014, 06:13:29 PM by bossx5 »
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