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Hi and welcome to MR cdpoke-san (interesting choice for an account name) but i know who you really are!creator of Coin and Flour, artist at Ohno-manga and Black ink comics with manga published nationwide. Youre none other than my mentor and master, Power-J. so nice of you to join us here. ^ ^
Mastur Jeff! You were here!!
I just wanted to send you this as a heads up, but on page 3, Ch 2 there is a dialogue error!
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I think she should say "You" instead of "For"?
Also, this needs to continue! It's such high quality, and your art is brilliant!!!!
and thank you for the compliment 
Fellow countrymen! 
Dancer ...again.
Right now, i'am stuck with line color transformation technique .
I can,t find the method to paint "Line less" style like some on the internet.
Coin & Flour is super cute~Yah you have a point there ^^;. But I'm projecting the demons and angels voices by the fonts, just like other subbed mangas. Demons have echoic demonic voices and echoic calm voices for the angels. The elevator operator is the only human so I gave her a manga font. Been thinking to change all the fonts to manga font coz we made a motion manga of it with voices but they didn't have echoic voices ^^; But overall you're right. I should done it for the first place OTL thank you for the tip.
I am reading through it now!
In case you don't know, font choice in a comic is very important. Normally, comic and manga artists use a font that is all uppercase. It makes it a lot easier to read, which in turn makes the whole comic look more professional.
It might seem like a little thing to nit-pick, but font can make, or break, a comic. The script font you are using for most of the comic is hard to read, especially in the tiny speech bubbles you have.
I am going to use one of your pages for an example:
See how the dialogue from the elevator attendant jumps out at you? It does that because of the uppercase font. I would encourage you to find a good uppercase font, and use it in the future. Or, even better, go though and change the font on your comic. You will notice a big difference.
If you need to find fonts, I recommend dafont.com
Make sure you modify your search for "Public Domain" and "Free" fonts. When you sell your comic (I think you should, it's awesome!) you want to avoid potential copyright issues.
Keep up the good work! I will be cheering you on! <3
Very very nice.
0.0 TEACH ME YOUR WAYS!!!!!!!!!! :O
Seriously, this is brilliant, well done! You're immensely talented at manga, and i hope you get published one day!
I'm only a few pages in, but i love the overall concept so far, it's very childish, and if you play it right, could capture a large age-range for an audience!
-on a side note, drawing all of those letters must have been a pain-
No problem. We try to keep things clean. You have an interesting story so don't forget to post couple pages in topic too. Link to full story can be kept in signature. :)
will post some pictures...It's cute! I like the design of the angels and demons-- it's kind of like that's part of them, and then also an accessory. Hope you do more~
Welcome!
I like how fun your art style is! I can't wait to see more!
welcome to MR!
Whoa, love those drawings! welcome to MR cd!
