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Wait, Dennis is blonde in America?? Huh.
Otherwise that was such as awesome chapter, I found myself honestly drawn into the story by their interactions and the conversation flow was so believable. Absolutely nothing felt out of place at all, was very cute to read. Real good stuff.
Artistically a couple of niggles, especially in the first panel I read the speech bubbles the wrong order, even reading left to right. Gotta keep in mind the height position of the bubble also affects the order they get read. Such as the reaction to "5". Typically the highest bubble gets read first regardless of where it is (maybe that's just me?) Faces are super cute as always but the pig seemed a little off somehow, maybe because I expect them to have folded ears and not be hairy+ (maybe that's how the one in the Dennis books appeared I don't remember)
Otherwise an absolutely great chapter, can wait to read more! Keep it up!
I must say, I'm quite a fan of candle head and the gym teacher, lol. Great goofs.
There did seem to be some weirdness in your images though? Some panels awkwardly repeat when Mr. Otto kool-aid man's his way through the wall(s). Some sort of rendering error?
I've noticed with practice you can improve your imagination to be more abstract again, it just takes practice. Children have a higher limit in their imagination simply because they have very little experience. As adults it is generally quite useful to have limits on our imagination (such as thinking of a business strategy for work etc), or rather our common sense filters out extreme/chaotic ideas before they make it into our consciousness. So it takes some reconditioning to be more randomly creative again, I'm working on that myself now :P
If your work is original then there's no risk of copyright issues of course, but yeah I'm hoping to get lucky with finances on my art because I'm not a marketing person ahahaha
ah cool, kid friendly sounds good. that's sort what what my Et Cetera story was meant to be :P
wow having ideas when you were that young? I didn't even think about stories until I was like 20-something :P
but nowadays I can relate to having lots of ideas and wanting to do them all.
Yeah when I draw super cute girls I sort of feel the same way, like is this really what I spent 10 years learning art for? makes me question my choices in life XD
good idea to work on the stories when you feel like it and there's always others when you don't feel like a certain one, I tried that for a bit but sort of shelved all the ideas and eventually started working on random ones just to get something going. We're all different in what motivates us of course :P
yeah you have totally done fantastically so far, definitely near a pro level output for sure. never stop improving though and you'll reach even better heights :P
yeah would be awesome to see you increase your output, I would love to see some of your manga in printed form as well, that would make them look really pro I think :P
wow starting another story! You're giving me a run for my money with open projects!!!!
a cute main character and judging from the story so far it's a bit slice-of-lifey? hard to tell if there's a serious plot yet since it's only a few pages but it's a pleasant read so far.
how do you find managing multiple stories?it can be hard to balance the time you put into each one I think.
