Hi DBnext yes after I finished I thought that the lines were too solid I just tried to make the shades darker and I could not do it wit a lead pencil so I've used black coloured pencil. Maybe I also pressed too hard to get them dark perhaps I need to buy a really dark pencil... On the second picture it is not a woman but a guy with long hair shaved on the sides but maybe next time I should look at male proportions better, maybe the armour shape on his chest looks like he have breast lol, thanks for your input!
Hi Ryan I will look at the video in a sec. The picture shows a wizard resurrecting a demon I just wanted to suggest demon's scary face coming out of the book. I've red your critique few times and wooow it is really insightful it will definitely help me with my next drawings. You even took your time to do a paintover

thank you for that! I will keep coming back to your post to remind myself what to work on.
Any of you guys have a gallery so that I could check it out?
Thanks again! I should be back with some drawings soon