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Alright, I'm glad you kind of have it figured out. Just think that 'having some more free time' seems like kind of a lousy excuse for killing off the whole of humanity, if you explain it like that. It's all about how you bring it!

Hey there! This idea seems interesting enough to comment on.

One of the things that bothered me while reading the synopsis is that the Shinigami are willing to kill everyone at once, essentially getting rid of their own jobs as soul reapers after everything is done. You'll have to explain what they're going to do after this whole 'purge' is done.

Other than that, I'll have to read more to get a good comment out. Lady_Linx said something about it sounding like Bleach but since I haven't read/watched it, I can't comment on that. Just try to stray away from it as much as possible.

Comics and other Gallery / Re: Miscellaneous Arts and Sketchbook
« on: August 20, 2014, 08:21:35 AM »
Well then it wasn't useless at least. Every small step is still a step towards greatness.

Comics and other Gallery / Re: Miscellaneous Arts and Sketchbook
« on: August 20, 2014, 08:18:03 AM »
I can only imagine. So does this Loomis book help well with improving?

Comics and other Gallery / Re: Miscellaneous Arts and Sketchbook
« on: August 20, 2014, 08:08:51 AM »
It's starting to look really good, lego! I like the style of the last drawings, although a bit less manga-y.

General Manga writer discussions / Re: Alternative Timeline?
« on: August 18, 2014, 07:23:24 PM »
and 3. that the separate timeline be different enough from the original timeline that it feels fresh and not just a rehashing with slightly different happenings.

While this isn't literature strictly speaking, the narrative in Bioshock Infinite does this, yet keeps it interesting.

You hop into several different timelines which change only a slight amount of things, some big and some small, but it makes no drastic changes to the world, while it does have big conscequences for the main characters.

Music / Re: Drops that'll make your P*ssy wet
« on: August 02, 2014, 10:29:56 AM »
I've recently discovered Aero Chord - Surface

Develop Your Story / Re: Dystopic Blades MR # 2
« on: May 16, 2014, 03:14:54 AM »
Hey guys!

Can somebody give me a quick update to what's happened so far? To refresh my memory? I've been away for a loooong time but I definitely still want to be a part of this.

Movies and TV shows / Re: The last movie you have watched
« on: October 09, 2013, 02:47:59 AM »
I watched Gravity on the day after the premiere, it's a really good movie with soooome plotholes but nothing too bothersome. And it's really intense, I breathed like three times the whole film through.

Manga Artists Battle Ground / Re: DRAW THAT RAIDER!!!
« on: October 06, 2013, 03:53:22 PM »
Whatever happened to this?

Manga Creations / Re: Beta
« on: October 06, 2013, 03:31:11 PM »
Quite striking though, that you resort to writing when you're drunk. Not the first thing that comes to my mind when I'm bevved up.

Manga Creations / Re: Beta
« on: October 06, 2013, 12:59:27 PM »
Looking good. I hope it was actually plot related and that it fits in with what you wanted, seeing as you don't remember writing it.

Develop Your Story / Re: Dystopic Blades MR # 2
« on: October 06, 2013, 12:55:00 PM »
Oh, Aero of all people. I remember Dystop 1. Dammit.

Welcome Center / Re: Hey there
« on: October 03, 2013, 05:33:59 PM »
Welcome to MR! You'll find it's a very welcoming place to people who like manga. Have you ever written your own story, by chance?

Develop Your Story / Re: Dystopic Blades MR # 2
« on: October 03, 2013, 12:45:22 PM »
Loving the writing style you've developed over time, it reads really easily yet it explains everything in careful detail. Thumbs up from me! Can't wait for blood and wind, hehehee.

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