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Title: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 08, 2019, 06:45:24 PM

Spoiler

This is my first manga. All constructive criticism is accepted.
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Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: Robin Rain on August 08, 2019, 07:05:48 PM

If you posted images, they're not showing up.

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 08, 2019, 07:17:07 PM

Quote from: Robin Ryuu on August 08, 2019, 07:05:48 PM

If you posted images, they're not showing up.

It seems to be working on my PC but not on mobile. Since I'm new to this site, I don't understand what's happening.

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: KeanFox on August 08, 2019, 08:15:59 PM

All of your links go to 403 Forbidden

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: DeAngelus on August 08, 2019, 09:43:19 PM

Pixiv had a security system that prevents sharing via image link, even if the person distributing it is the artist themselves unless provided (you can link it to your Facebook and Twitter).

You've no choice but to upload it somewhere else and them post the image links to display the images in question.

https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=42682774 <- Your profile, I think?

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 09, 2019, 09:20:55 AM

Quote from: BlackManga on August 08, 2019, 07:17:07 PM

Quote from: Robin Ryuu on August 08, 2019, 07:05:48 PM

If you posted images, they're not showing up.

It seems to be working on my PC but not on mobile. Since I'm new to this site, I don't understand what's happening.

I'm very sorry for the difficulties, but I've been told what the problem is and fixed it. They should now be visible.

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 09, 2019, 09:21:18 AM

Quote from: KeanFox on August 08, 2019, 08:15:59 PM

All of your links go to 403 Forbidden

I'm very sorry for the difficulties, but I've been told what the problem is and fixed it. They should now be visible.

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 09, 2019, 09:21:57 AM

Quote from: DeAngelus on August 08, 2019, 09:43:19 PM

Pixiv had a security system that prevents sharing via image link, even if the person distributing it is the artist themselves unless provided (you can link it to your Facebook and Twitter).

You've no choice but to upload it somewhere else and them post the image links to display the images in question.

https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=42682774 <- Your profile, I think?

Thank you so much! I have now solved the issue thanks to you.

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: Suuper-san on August 09, 2019, 12:50:09 PM

welcome to the forum!
And great comic!
the action was awesome and the character designs are cool. would be great to see another chapter!
how long did it take to draw?

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 09, 2019, 01:10:15 PM

Quote from: suuper-san on August 09, 2019, 12:50:09 PM

welcome to the forum!
And great comic!
the action was awesome and the character designs are cool. would be great to see another chapter!
how long did it take to draw?

Thanks! I might add other chapters later, and this specific one took me a few months. Maybe 3-4.

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: Suuper-san on August 09, 2019, 01:27:02 PM

hopefully you'll churn the next one out faster XD
I'm generally 2 years in between producing chapters, of different stories, so I can't really talk haha

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 09, 2019, 01:33:13 PM

Quote from: suuper-san on August 09, 2019, 01:27:02 PM

hopefully you'll churn the next one out faster XD
I'm generally 2 years in between producing chapters, of different stories, so I can't really talk haha

I actually have many completed in store. The 1st chapter is always much longer than the rest. The other chapters are shorter and take about a week to make if I don't procrastinate.

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: Suuper-san on August 09, 2019, 04:10:22 PM

a week, huh?
thats pretty hardcore, and yes procrastination is the enemy. If I actually drew using all the free time I had, now wouldnt that be something.....

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 09, 2019, 04:51:06 PM

Quote from: suuper-san on August 09, 2019, 04:10:22 PM

a week, huh?
thats pretty hardcore, and yes procrastination is the enemy. If I actually drew using all the free time I had, now wouldnt that be something.....

To be fair, with the exception of the 1st, the chapters only range from 12 to 16 pages, and I was on summer break, so I had all week. But then again, I do tend to procrastinate...

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 11, 2019, 10:53:54 AM

Spoiler

This the second chapter
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Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 11, 2019, 11:00:56 AM

Spoiler

Here is chapter 3
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Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: Coryn on August 19, 2019, 07:46:59 AM

Really cool manga you've got going on Black! I need to come back when I have more time to make story comments, but from an artistic perspective, you're really managing to do a lot with a little in terms of complexity! There isn't a huge level of detail, but it's clear what's going on!

(On a side note, may I suggest using our spoiler tag system? You can generate some by using the "Sp" button when posting. They will help condense each page of the topic and keep scrolling easy for people (especially for those of us on a phone, haha))

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: BlackManga on August 19, 2019, 02:22:32 PM

Quote from: Coryn on August 19, 2019, 07:46:59 AM

Really cool manga you've got going on Black! I need to come back when I have more time to make story comments, but from an artistic perspective, you're really managing to do a lot with a little in terms of complexity! There isn't a huge level of detail, but it's clear what's going on!

(On a side note, may I suggest using our spoiler tag system? You can generate some by using the "Sp" button when posting. They will help condense each page of the topic and keep scrolling easy for people (especially for those of us on a phone, haha))

Thanks! It means a lot! And thanks for explaining the spoiler tag system. Using it makse it easier to navigate.

Title: Re: Tantei 10
Post by: legomaestro on February 01, 2020, 01:17:09 PM

Damn I could almost swear I'd already commented on this. Super late to the party but I really liked the chapters. I love action like this in shounen. It's always been shounen at its' best when there's some good balance between battle physics and super powers. Naruto at its best moment is a shining example of that and basically Hunter X Hunter every time.

Good stuff. Hope you're still working on this (if you're around)