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Offline fakehero

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« on: January 06, 2014, 03:34:26 AM »
manga page and illustration

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« Last Edit: July 16, 2015, 10:15:55 PM by fakehero »
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Re: Drawings
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2014, 04:33:14 AM »
Damn it man you've got the skills of a pro. Lots of fan services too.
I get a Naruto/Bleach vibe from your style.
Anatomy is great and panels are easy to follow. Just watch out for the spacing between them. Horizontal spaces are usually larger than vertical ones, as it helps the flow.
I'm not a big fan of the amount of tones you're using, mostly because I like manga to have dark contrast.

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« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2014, 06:28:12 AM »
I looked at some manga and you're right about the spacing man, thank you!(sorry for my English it's bad)
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Re: Drawings
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2014, 06:53:53 AM »
Wow..........just......wow
Did you do this all digitally?

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« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2014, 08:29:23 AM »
Waw man this is really amazing  :ohmy: , the coloring and the shading
I really like it, i got no better words.
Amazing  :thumbsup:

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Re: Drawings
« Reply #5 on: January 06, 2014, 11:45:10 AM »
Holy schnitzel on a stick man. Pro stuff here! Are you using a 3d software for the backgrounds? They look so clean!

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« Reply #6 on: January 06, 2014, 01:52:33 PM »
 :clapping: Super legit work right there. The details are amazing especially the background work. You got yourself a great manga started there

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« Reply #7 on: January 06, 2014, 05:40:48 PM »
@ DXDEVIL13 - yrs all digital

@ David2302@VirtuosicMoon thanks

@ legomaestro   - that's what i'm trying to do right, i used 3d on the swimming pool.
youtube.com/watch?v=PAUKymZigxQ < i'm copying how he does things.                                                 
« Last Edit: January 06, 2014, 05:42:24 PM by fakehero »
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« Reply #8 on: January 06, 2014, 06:09:27 PM »
Critz: Line art. Your line art is a bit scratchy, try to practice getting cleaner lines and longer strokes.
 
Your work is pretty professional, how long have you been drawing?

I see a close resemblance in your work to the manga Terraformars, was this an inspiration?

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« Reply #9 on: January 06, 2014, 06:16:41 PM »
I like your style of drawing really Kubo/Kishimoto like!  :thumbsup: You got the skills to pay the bills! Keep em' coming and hope to see your manga real soon. And the anatomy is perfect!!!  

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« Reply #10 on: January 06, 2014, 10:28:28 PM »

@KagePen- I see, i will do this thanks.
                 Thanks,  digitally I've been drawing for about 2.5 years now maybe 3.
                No, i don't know Terraformars.

@SyncG4x - lol, thanks.                 
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Re: Drawings
« Reply #11 on: January 07, 2014, 08:32:14 AM »
what i am going to say is not about your skill but your choice of what you did.

to me your drawing is weird, i can't point out what it is but it give me a feeling like you are still finding something.
like your background , (again not skill) some of the box you use background and some didn't. i am not saying all should use background but i can't understand why you use background on some box (maybe you just useing 3d model so is not a big thing). and your drawing choice is also missing something, some strong feeling.

now on the skill of choice part.
kagepen had say that your line art is scratchy , i agree but since you using cgi so i don't think is a big problem, if you want clean line just use vector line.  although is a diff way of doing thing.

to me the problem of the line is your line thickness . your far view and close view the line thickness it seem to me is the same.  i not sure if you understand , but what i am trying to say is when close view you should not make your line too thick. small line will give a close view feeling and not a zoom in feeling

but thick line give a strong feeling to viewer , so have to choose well of what feeling you want to give.


and about your color . well i can't give you what is right or wrong, all i can give is what feeling i understand .
your color 1 look and it can tell is a cgi, to me good coloring is that people can't tell if that is oil painting or real person.

so your case is, you should try to make your color can't tell if is a cgi or paper coloring. or water color and oil painting. have to base of what feeling you want to give.

to me now your color choice it give a strong feeling but at the same time it is not strong. clean and is not clean.

well can't say i got say any useful thing but again i feel that you are still finding something.
and some of your color make me remember "murata range"

« Last Edit: January 07, 2014, 09:03:03 AM by kinre »
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« Reply #12 on: January 08, 2014, 03:22:20 AM »
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to me your drawing is weird, i can't point out what it is but it give me a feeling like you are still finding something.
like your background , (again not skill) some of the box you use background and some didn't. i am not saying all should use background but i can't understand why you use background on some box (maybe you just useing 3d model so is not a big thing). and your drawing choice is also missing something, some strong feeling.

you're right about that maybe my drawings lack emotion and i draw them lifelessly, i guess im just gonna try harder and about the bg its just me being lazy.

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to me the problem of the line is your line thickness . your far view and close view the line thickness it seem to me is the same.  i not sure if you understand , but what i am trying to say is when close view you should not make your line too thick. small line will give a close view feeling and not a zoom in feeling

but thick line give a strong feeling to viewer , so have to choose well of what feeling you want to give.

yea i get you, i just like it like that.

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and about your color . well i can't give you what is right or wrong, all i can give is what feeling i understand .
your color 1 look and it can tell is a cgi, to me good coloring is that people can't tell if that is oil painting or real person.

so your case is, you should try to make your color can't tell if is a cgi or paper coloring. or water color and oil painting. have to base of what feeling you want to give.

to me now your color choice it give a strong feeling but at the same time it is not strong. clean and is not clean.

i see i'll keep that in mind. thanks.
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Re: Drawings
« Reply #13 on: January 08, 2014, 10:48:23 AM »
i see, well i guess the final advise  i can give is to keep trying diff way of doing thing.

and 1 more thing , manga  is diff from illustration

i will say you should try to make 2 set of skill.
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« Reply #14 on: February 26, 2014, 01:44:44 AM »
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« Last Edit: March 04, 2014, 06:50:21 AM by fakehero »
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