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Author Topic: Space Commandos Manga  (Read 8160 times)

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Offline Zero_Ichimura

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Re: Space Commandos Manga
« Reply #15 on: October 11, 2008, 03:18:46 PM »
well hasith sry i posted this earlier i guess it didnt go thru, but the home world isnt earth. the soldiers r from earth but there stranded on the enemies home planet. there base was destroyed and they were the only ones to make it out

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Re: Space Commandos Manga
« Reply #16 on: October 11, 2008, 06:22:50 PM »
that makes more sense


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Re: Space Commandos Manga
« Reply #17 on: October 11, 2008, 10:20:37 PM »
I see. This is why I told you have to tell a summery of events which happened till the start of story. Its ok since you haven't finalized the story yet. I think story is interesting, keep going.

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Re: Space Commandos Manga
« Reply #18 on: November 17, 2008, 05:38:02 PM »
i wanted to try a different kind of telling method here which was where flashes of wat happend leading up to the event would come up in the story line. its hard to do without rly confusing ur readers but if u do it right its spectacular

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Re: Space Commandos Manga
« Reply #19 on: November 18, 2008, 08:25:26 AM »
its a lot easier to do if you making an anime

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Re: Space Commandos Manga
« Reply #20 on: November 18, 2008, 09:28:56 AM »
yah its tru its difficult to write that kind of story