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Lair of things
« on: November 15, 2013, 01:15:23 PM »
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yes I draw.....oddly enough

Magician Dragon
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Practice with Hands and....aliens (or frog)
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THE THING
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« Last Edit: April 19, 2014, 02:43:41 PM by Coryn »
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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2013, 02:18:21 PM »
Hello everlastin'  :sheep:

You're off to a nice start, I can't give critique on the dragons 'cuz mythical creatures defy the rules of anatomy, though the symbols on the Magician Dragon are unnatural and out of place. To combat that you can try a 3D tattoo approach.

The thumb on the hand isn't full enough, it needs to be a bit bigger, you can also move it a tad more up.

Other than that all I can say is practice more with your pencil so you can reduce the scratchyness of the lines.

Keep at it! Work hard and prosper ^_^

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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2013, 02:22:08 PM »
I realized the thing about that thumb but am too lazy to fix it on the paper lol what did you think of the alien hand?
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« Reply #3 on: November 15, 2013, 02:30:45 PM »
It's awesome :D A bit scratchy but that's a matter of practice with the pencil :smile:  I want to shake an alien's hand one day :ninja:

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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #4 on: November 15, 2013, 04:51:49 PM »
Here is my sense of humor as a kid (I was 6 or 7 when I drew this)
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I drew an image off of a tin.....(I will post the tin later)
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And more dragon training....I mean practice  :tongue: (most of these are practice from neondragons art book)
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^evil scanner hates color pencils
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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2013, 10:33:27 PM »
A bit scratchy but that's a matter of practice with the pencil :smile:

I've been drawing for 7 years.....I normally use mechanical pencils but I drew this with a regular one
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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #6 on: November 18, 2013, 10:18:46 AM »
I cheated with this and traced my hand  :tongue: but everything else i'm doing with my mechanical pencil
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Here is some digital art....and more humor
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and random gif I made V

« Last Edit: November 18, 2013, 05:59:07 PM by everlastin01 »
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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #7 on: November 20, 2013, 10:31:49 PM »
Haha dat animation.

Those pants are totally hipster. I'm buying them

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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #8 on: November 20, 2013, 11:34:35 PM »
Those pants are totally hipster. I'm buying them
sure you don't need the inflate-abs too? lol  :tongue:
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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #9 on: November 21, 2013, 12:13:05 AM »

 I can't give critique on the dragons 'cuz mythical creatures defy the rules of anatomy,


Kagepen. Here are some links and pictures to help you lrn2anatomy

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Sorry about the crappy scan, books are a pain. Anyways the point here is that all mythical creatures are either based on one type of animal or a combination of several. Any artist who knows what they are doing will have studied the anatomy for the creature that they are drawing.

For example:

Serpent dragons you study SNAKE anatomy... Or lizard dragons you study Lizard anatomy. if you want to add wings you study BIRDS....

a mythical creature that doesn't follow the basic laws of anatomy just doesn't look cool. It looks weird and like a five year old drew it.

Everlastin your dragon isn't too bad. it needs work. I'd say if you want it to be serpentine study a snake because right now it's like a salamander on steroids. Which you can work with.

Also have a feng video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dnflBERf2zM

Sorry the images are so huge.

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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #10 on: November 21, 2013, 12:28:15 AM »
thank you emocookie41 for the anatomy
(I like salamanders.....but not on steroids)
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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #11 on: November 21, 2013, 08:43:54 PM »
I think my favourite thing here is the first hand you posted. Keep up the good work.

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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #12 on: April 17, 2014, 11:07:39 PM »
it has been awhile since I posted in this so here are some thing I made today!
Dragon...colored in highlighter
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Random Thing I created based of a squiggly thing I doodled
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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #13 on: April 18, 2014, 08:03:46 PM »
Lovely drawings everlastin01  :thumbsup:.

You doodle creature reminds me Pok√©mon/Digidemon  ;D

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Re: Liar of things
« Reply #14 on: April 18, 2014, 08:06:42 PM »
hey assistant, great stuff. though I must wonder. did you mean lair? not liar?

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