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"Charmed" Discussion Thread
« on: September 19, 2013, 05:00:59 PM »
Was not sure where to put this but this is the discussion thread for my first manga script "Charmed"

Here is where you can post your critiques and opinions on the work (I really reallly want to make this good so be brutally honest).

I can take the bad critiques, it might sting a bit but I know you only do it for my own good.

Here is where you can find the link to the story, summary, ect.
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,8554.0.html

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Re: "Charmed" Discussion Thread
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2013, 05:59:37 PM »
I'll request my comment to be moved.
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Re: "Charmed" Discussion Thread
« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2013, 06:00:25 PM »
Thank you ^^

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Re: "Charmed" Discussion Thread
« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2013, 09:29:29 PM »
Ok so I read chapter 1. I liked it. It didn't draw me away and the characters seemed mostly natural. I feel the prologue may have revealed a little too much on Castiel and Catherine simply because the prologue was focused on explaining demons and their pawns.

Personally it gives me a sense of Kiki's delivery service. But I'm sure its completely different later on
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Re: "Charmed" Discussion Thread
« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2013, 09:39:51 PM »
I love kiki's delivery service XD now that I think about it the main characters are fairly similar in regards of personality.

Catherine and Castiel won't be talked about very often in the manga, occasionally referenced with the story of how they did what they did more detailed.

Glad the characters are natural o.o was worried

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Re: "Charmed" Discussion Thread
« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2013, 09:47:00 PM »
Yeah. But I do feel it being just slightly rushed in chapter 1. I may need to reread it just in case. I think it was mainly in part 2.
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Re: "Charmed" Discussion Thread
« Reply #6 on: October 21, 2013, 04:47:20 PM »
Nice introduction of characters so far. The father is really funny. Not sure abut Jon and Xander, but it'll be interesting in seeing how things go.

I guess a human charm generally tends to become a love interest don't they? I doubt it would work in any other way. I also wonder what charms Mrs. Languish has/has had