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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #495 on: February 14, 2019, 01:08:50 AM »
@suuper Gotcha. And thanks! I'm finding it's a lot harder to keep a consistent schedule, even though I'm trying to post every two weeks. Part of the challenge I guess.

Yep! It's fun to see characters transform c:


Lately I've been just sketching/doodling. Not a lot of finished works.
Earlier this month I attempted a different style after looking at some art books. I need to get used to colouring more....It was fun to do and I rather like the result of it.
Feel free to give suggestions/feeback.

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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #496 on: February 16, 2019, 08:32:18 AM »
It looks good Echo! The shading/colouring on the hair is particularly well done. Overall there's not much I can offer in terms of feedback other than maybe the shading on the face isn't quite right. If I look at it for a while something about the placement of the shadows on the nose and left side (our left) of the face doesn't seem to quite add up. It feels more of a nit pick than anything glaringly wrong though, either way great work.

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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #497 on: March 10, 2019, 06:17:51 PM »
nice headshot. I agree with Dev the shadow placement feels a little off. As well I think the nostril lines are maybe too low or too far apart, it makes the nose look quite wide. For learning shade and practice, photos and observation are your best bet obviously.
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« Reply #498 on: June 02, 2019, 08:28:54 AM »
Nice face!

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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #499 on: July 22, 2019, 05:22:39 PM »
Hm, well I haven't posted here in a while. How've you all been? I've still been drawing, digitally and traditionally. I'll pull up a few for ya'll.

Also, thanks for your feedback guys! (super late, I apologize) I see what you mean on the nose. I haven't attempted to create anything similar to it yet. If you'd like to see more of my drawings, most of them are on my IG, where I'm a little more active.

Here are some new pieces done over the past few months, in no particular order:



Character - Nakaja and Neske (Charred Life)


Character - Eraen (Charred Life)


Character - Dae (Charred Life)






Character - Ailuja (Charred Life)


 
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Re: Echo Archives
« Reply #500 on: July 23, 2019, 01:02:25 AM »
Awesome work, I really like... well basically everything you did lol, you even have really good anatomy for your characters which most people struggle on

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« Reply #501 on: July 23, 2019, 11:42:05 AM »
Looking real good Echo! Also, I may be being dumb, but have you posted your story on the the forum at all? If so I'd love to read it.

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« Reply #502 on: July 23, 2019, 10:01:35 PM »
@Vikings Thanks c: Tbh, I have to credit references for help in anatomy. When I feel unsure about something, I go search it up. ^^ What parts stuck out specifically to you?

@Vacant I....did. A long time ago :biggrin: However it's pretty outdated and I've actually scrapped everything I had in the story thread. It's in the rewriting process at the moment, plus I know I'm going to be editing it quite a bit so I'm a little hesitant about sharing the rough of it. But ey, that's what MR is for. I'd be glad for some feedback too. I'll get that updated for ya!
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« Reply #503 on: July 24, 2019, 12:22:23 AM »
@Vikings Thanks c: Tbh, I have to credit references for help in anatomy. When I feel unsure about something, I go search it up. ^^ What parts stuck out specifically to you?

@Vacant I....did. A long time ago :biggrin: However it's pretty outdated and I've actually scrapped everything I had in the story thread. It's in the rewriting process at the moment, plus I know I'm going to be editing it quite a bit so I'm a little hesitant about sharing the rough of it. But ey, that's what MR is for. I'd be glad for some feedback too. I'll get that updated for ya!

Eraen's body within that shot is perfect, people usually struggle on the legs and shoulders, especially in a position like she is in, and I love the confidence and boastful grin she has, that one emotion placed onto her face reveals her character more for the reader.

Ailuja's position also looks like a difficult position to do the anatomy so well, especially the shoulders and arm length, let alone the leg length even through her being on her knees.

I need to know more about this story much like @Vacant wanted to know lol

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« Reply #504 on: July 24, 2019, 11:58:59 PM »
@Vacant I....did. A long time ago :biggrin: However it's pretty outdated and I've actually scrapped everything I had in the story thread. It's in the rewriting process at the moment, plus I know I'm going to be editing it quite a bit so I'm a little hesitant about sharing the rough of it. But ey, that's what MR is for. I'd be glad for some feedback too. I'll get that updated for ya!

I empathise, I'm in a similar situation myself. Well I'll keep an eye out and look forward to reading it.

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« Reply #505 on: July 25, 2019, 02:30:32 AM »
Ailuja looks really good! Great wolf

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« Reply #506 on: July 25, 2019, 07:32:12 AM »
lovely stuff. and nice to see you around :)
the last one is my favourite, and I much prefer the traditional/monochrome stuff, probably because traditional can be really expressive and dynamic with the shading and stuff, whereas digital shading is often more realistic as blocks of colour.
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« Reply #507 on: July 25, 2019, 12:59:49 PM »
@Walter Thanks man!

@suuper Good to see you too c: Yeah, I haven't studied colour very much and I find it a challenge since I'm used to monochrome. Textures and shading definitely more fun in traditional drawing for me.
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« Reply #508 on: August 03, 2019, 10:33:28 PM »
A while ago I did a series of pictures using my colour pencils as a sort of self-challenge (and to get out of an art block). Here a few of the better ones. I had to draw them without setting down guidelines (the colours like green and orange are really hard to erase well ^^; ) so the anatomy might be a bit wonky.

Character - Kiaut


Character - Dave


Character - Eono and Raven


Character - Roun
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« Reply #509 on: August 04, 2019, 04:18:37 PM »
I really like Raven! Spooky corvid girl for the win!

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