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[Echo_River]

So these are some of my drawings. I will be posting more.
Some are older. They're mostly from my story.
And I have a habit of marking each character's name with the finishing date.

I'd like your honest critique and comments.
Thanks. ^_^


Team Adsoku Sierra. Consists of Akoshi, Kekuri, Itashi, and Yunako Adsoku, their Siloete aide Keltalyn, and canine assist Eskarou.


Other children from the Adsoku family. 'Cept each are in different operations.
From the left: Nirwu (Artic Operations)
                       Kaina (Works in Marine Operations with sister Gayel)
                       Kamina (middle) Siloete for all girls
                       Cysel (More in Dockyard Operations)
                       Gayel (Naval Operations) Original name was Naura.


Arisan Akalos


Not from story. More of a random drawing.
But it's called Team Clash

The story consists of Four Clans: The Nanrot, Coroyal, Acor, and Xohawen, from oldest to youngest.
    Within the Acor (The clan most focused on) there are for families: Tiuruh, Nioni, Hakara, and Adsoku.
    The main character is part of the Tiuruh Family, although he is not an Acor. He's a Nanrot, which is part of the story. (And I can't draw him)

[lasthope2300]

I like them all. The middle kid in the first one looks real determined to grab the lady behind him...jk. Seriously tho, I think they all look pretty good. There are only minor tweaks that could be made like two of the character's heads are slightly too big. Do you write as well?

[50 Words for Paipis]

This is all good stuff. Not much criticism I can offer. They all seem to be wearing mild expressions, which could be attributed to their character, but you might want to try for some variety. Maybe you could draw the characters with a few more exaggerated expressions.

[Echo_River]

@lasthope2300 Wait which middle kid O_O.  Yunako? (She's a girl XD) And yeah, I have to work on proportions. Yes I write, and mostly sci-fi.

@Paipis Panella Thanks XD. Hmm, yes most of them are rather dull looking. Partly due to their history in the story. But I haven't worked much on it as well. Should though...

Here's more:


Sisters from the Nioni Family.
Ceri is equipped with the chain and ball.
Karana wields knives.
Kandra is the Nioni doctor/healer figure.
Casara is a sniper. (But I don't know what model she has, haven't considered...)


Well, all the characters that start with 'N' (I seem to like that letter ^_^)
How do I do this...
(Bottom Row-left to right):Nirwu Adsoku(headset),  Navran Tiuruh(Bag and hair accessories),  Nameni(Teddy)
              Nigcht Nioni,   Nikola Dennart(Coroyal),   Nenuka(Goggles)
(Middle sections-left to right): Nakaja(braided hair over shoulder),   Naruka Tiuruh(Centre),   Nillan Nioni,
              Naoki Hakara(Visor as headband)
(Back Row-left to right): Naura(Gayel, but previous name was Naura, and wanted to fill space)
              Nuyori Hashiue(Is a Tiuruh but she got married XD),   Naisgh Nioni,   Nakari Hakara.

I don't think you'll be able to pronouce some of them XD

[Echo_River]

Re-draw of a bunch of random characters done a few years back.
All re-done drastically different from primary drawings...which are not worth looking at anymore.

[lasthope2300]

Cool. I like the kid in the bottom right corner. Good pose. 

[Echo_River]

Hehe, thanks lasthope2300, much appreciated.
That'd be..Kal? He's Arisan's (Third Pic in First Post) brother.



Most recent drawing.
Please tell me what you think.
I need more motivation to draw more.
 

[lasthope2300]

nice not bad. The guy sticking his tongue out looks kinda like ichigo with staightened hair

[P4]

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[Echo_River]

@lasthope2300 ichigo...with straight hair...ahaha, I see, I've never watched Bleach.

@P4 'make up for it in a way with the pose of the body'- I never noticed that. I'm usually trying to improve and poses and faces altogether so I don't have to catch up on a lot. Thanks for pointing that out.
 
Nikola or Nikki, is usually nervous, even around friends. She gets intimidated by the boss at the base she's apart of, being a Coroyal, which is the second oldest clan in my story and one of the despised ones as well. But her friends, like Naoki, the girl standing behind her, don't know that. They're Acori, who would naturally shun Coroyal cause of a certain incident that is one of the starting points in my story.

The Coroyal operate at their base, the Layoroc.



This one is actually an older one.
At the Bottom form the left we have: Nenuka Adsoku,  Tarel Nioni, and Ettilis Hakara.
     -The girl and the boy in a half-mask: Lidani and Dakare Tiuruh.
     -And the two twins in the back are: Kon and Kei Adsoku.

[lasthope2300]

pretty good. The boy in the middle's arms are too skinny and too short but this is older so you've probably gotten much better with proportions.

[Echo_River]

Hm, yes, that was September last year.
This one is a little more recent. Another group, just siblings this time again.
But they work together, like the Jan. 28/13 group (First post, they're family too), in a shadow division known as the Shades. They're just one group in a dozen.

Also a second try on glasses. What do you think?

[lasthope2300]

Great! The girl at the bottom reminds me of colonel mustangs lieutenant in fullmetal alchemist. I think your character would look more interesting if you usd more varieties of facial expressions. Thats the only criticism i have for you right now.

[Echo_River]

Ah, right. Well, I'm working on a drawing right now to try to improve that XD.
Meanwhile I'll just post these.

This one's ancient, I can't even find the date...
Some of the characters I revised.



There's that old man doing a wave. He was also in the March 29/13 Pic.
Ceri Nioni is here as well. Little animated girl talking to-
Naruka Tiuruh with the leafy stick up in her hair.
Her sister Karana (old style) is walking by, while behind her-
Is a Noturn Wolf, that's startling-
Nigcht Nioni.
And in the back just two other boys Nanik and someone else. With the wolf pup standing by them.



Eh, with the bland expressions again. A little newer.
These were drawn on a letter to my friend. Characters of the story I just finished (Hence the 'End')
Wonder if I should show you that one too...

[Echo_River]

Apparently, I can't draw, whenever I want to nor how I'd like it to turn out.
So I haven't drawn anything much new worth posting.

Other than that, and the expressions - what do you think about the overall anatomy? I know I stilll have to work on hands.
Or clothing? Variety of costumes?