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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #45 on: November 20, 2012, 01:24:12 AM »
The moon is cheese, the clouds are geese
Sanity mopes in its lair

The day is old the sun swims in the sea
And the twilight people dance

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #46 on: November 20, 2012, 01:28:25 AM »
geese doesn't rhyme with clock <.<

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #47 on: November 20, 2012, 04:06:10 AM »
I was rhyming square with lair >.>

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #48 on: November 20, 2012, 09:59:41 AM »
*has to go watch young frankenstein again*

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As an example, this I shall say
You shall not find me, rolling in ze hay

Tick tock goes the clock
Running 'round the city square

Little children throwing rocks
cross them if you dare

sunlight through the window
snow from under the door       

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #49 on: November 20, 2012, 12:31:56 PM »
See. Musick's got it. You have to match two rhymes. Then make two more.

Clutching to my pillow
Lost forever more

This is my final testament
The world is falling fast

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #50 on: November 20, 2012, 12:54:06 PM »
Now I am hesitant
I knew it would never last

The images in my mind
The pain, sorrow and fear
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #51 on: November 20, 2012, 01:23:54 PM »
They are my bitter wine
i squeeze out my last tear

As i fall in a vacuum
I clutch for a string of hope

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #52 on: November 20, 2012, 05:49:22 PM »
What the heck rhymes with vaccum...

looking up at the black moon
now I'm hanging by a swinging rope


I heard foot steps up the steps
creaking one by one
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #53 on: November 27, 2012, 02:03:26 AM »
They sounded like the bumbling way of a schelp
and i waited for the knock to come

Sitting at wooden table
it's surfaces etched with ancient graffiti

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« Reply #54 on: November 27, 2012, 08:48:06 AM »
Thinking I would never be able
So I gave up and flew to Tahiti!

I should have tried harder
Now Im miles behind


We should try to make the rhymes go together!!
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #55 on: November 27, 2012, 03:46:39 PM »
But my body's faster
than my hesitant mind

I began my impromptu race
went across the world: just me and my suitcase

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #56 on: December 10, 2012, 03:22:49 PM »
I'm writing a story in sonnets

A MIDWINTER NIGHT’S DAYDREAM


Four fresh mods stood on the street corner.

All faces happy: and without sadness.

None suspecting they may soon be mourners.

Yet approaching them: a man full of madness.

Toast was the first to suspect there was something amiss.

A flick of cold wind: lashing against his cheek.

Soon however, in his ears did he hear a hiss.

The world around him: suddenly becoming bleak.

Feet slammed against his face, Coryn’s body perpendicular against him.

Soon he flew, bouncing along the lane.

The others stood back, their supposed comrade seemingly doing this on a whim.

Coryn still stood, face smiling as if winning a game.

“There is something for you to know, a decree that must be met.”

“You have not known it, but your training is not over yet.”

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #57 on: December 10, 2012, 03:37:02 PM »
You kick me in the face and then proceed to tell me that I have to work harder.

AM I NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR YOU? ;_;
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #58 on: December 10, 2012, 04:18:41 PM »
kicking you in the face is my way of showing i care.

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #59 on: December 10, 2012, 05:48:29 PM »
Ah... i see now.
"no daddy!!! don't hit me again!!"
"it's because i love you!!!!" 
*dies*

oh dear... coryn... i think you have issues
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