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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #30 on: November 18, 2012, 11:13:23 AM »
My power is limitless, never coming to a stop.
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #31 on: November 18, 2012, 12:41:18 PM »
what digilance! you only think your on top.
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #32 on: November 18, 2012, 12:54:43 PM »
My mere presence sparks flames, the world is set ablaze.
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #33 on: November 18, 2012, 03:54:00 PM »
your so obsessed to make a name, reaching for those minutes of fame.
up the challenge! if you dare. two lines, i think, would be fair.
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #34 on: November 18, 2012, 04:13:43 PM »
Finishing up my assignments from my dark lair
Thinking of her across the hallways, my lady fair

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #35 on: November 18, 2012, 04:43:04 PM »
Swagging off a million, throwing money in the air
Spitting sick rhymes, while I'm picking my awesome hair
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« Reply #36 on: November 18, 2012, 04:49:04 PM »
I'll start a new thing every time i sing
the cascade of tears from the crowd rejuvinating

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #37 on: November 18, 2012, 04:54:28 PM »
My mouth is like a cooler, my flow is cold as ice
Those who dare to compete scurry like little mice
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #38 on: November 19, 2012, 10:19:40 AM »


You eat kinda sloopy, in your tooth is rice.
you forgot your comma, but i guess it will suffice.
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #39 on: November 19, 2012, 01:03:01 PM »
wouldn't this make more sense. Instead of you just rhyming with yourself, if you have the first and second line have different endings. So the next person has to match both of them. And then they themselves post two more lines like this.

That way everybody has to match two separate rhymes. And also create two separate rhymes.

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« Reply #40 on: November 19, 2012, 02:40:45 PM »
Um.... you mean: First person AB,AB. CD,CD  Second person CD,CD  EF,EF  ??

that would make more sense... and be alittle more um... structured?
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #41 on: November 19, 2012, 04:41:52 PM »
let's say you have two lines. two different endings

line 1
line 2

I would match those

rhyme 1
rhyme 2

then add my own

line 3
line 4

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« Reply #42 on: November 19, 2012, 07:00:55 PM »
OH! ok. LETS DO IT!!!!!!!
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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #43 on: November 20, 2012, 12:19:43 AM »
Bonjour i say, have a nice day
the cat man has come out to play

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Re: Poetry House
« Reply #44 on: November 20, 2012, 01:11:47 AM »
As an example, this I shall say
You shall not find me, rolling in ze hay

Tick tock goes the clock
Running 'round the city square

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