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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #60 on: January 12, 2013, 10:38:37 AM »
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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #61 on: January 12, 2013, 02:30:58 PM »
the BRS one is good because everything else is greyscale except fro the flame thingy, which makes it quite contrasty cool :P

a bit of advice which i learnt myself just recently doing the hair, unless you meant to draw it like that....(well heres my advice regardless)......keep the hair strands as similar length as possible (in the ponytail), if you keep stranding bits off as you go, it looks more like a tail than hair. since i cant really explain it, heres two pictures that i drew
WRONG:
http://i1127.photobucket.com/albums/l627/suupertramp/IMG_0003-2.jpg
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http://i1127.photobucket.com/albums/l627/suupertramp/Untitled_zps3effd297.png
this is only my opinion, take what you want from it :P
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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #62 on: January 13, 2013, 12:24:19 PM »
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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #63 on: January 13, 2013, 01:01:50 PM »
nice. you got the folds mostly right, but the foot shape is a bit out. for starters, try not making the heel go so far backwards, keeping it a bit more in line with the leg line

and yes it does depend on how the hair is layered :P
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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #64 on: January 14, 2013, 05:05:47 PM »
nooooooooo dont cuttttttt!!!!
the best thing in this drawing is the clothes, realistic folds and sharply drawn
i think the thing that could use the most work is the hands, they look fairly good on glance, but i noticed they dont quite look right, perhaps they are slightly too big or one line somehwere is too long or short i cant tell. the fringe seems to be almost the same bit of hair drawn over and over again. try drawing a few larger clumps of hair in between smaller ones for a bit of variety.
overall, quite good,ah also the leg looks like its twisted around too far
I thinks that the hand with scissors looks right but the one holding the hair looks off. Not really sure. I'm always practicing hands anyway though. Regarding the bangs, I see what you're saying but they are different widths, I guess I could have differentiated more though.
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On to new stuff.

I copied Okabe Rintarou from Steins;Gate, purely for how to approach this perspective I wasn't really going for accuracy. As downshots and upshots are a bit tough for me.



Here's a quick sketch of my main character for my manga story I've had thought up for awhile. I did this really quickly and was mainly to get across how I want him to look, he is based partially off myself so it'll seem familiar to other things I've drawn before. His name is Ryuhou Yamada.



Here's a somewhat better drawing of him before an action scene. I didn't put much thought into it so it didn't turn out as good as I wanted. I should have planned it out better.

Anyway to explain the picture, deep into the story he gains a Godly power in which he can control the atoms to things he touches and the atmosphere around him as long as he knows how they work. Basically the better he is with physics, the more OP he is (my logic may be off, still working things out though). He learns how to create and manipulate lightning easily out of normal atmospheric things so he uses it frequently. He uses throwing daggers (as shown in the drawing) as he can accelerate them when thrown.



I particularly liked these drawings. The doctor and the lightning kid. really nice characterization imo

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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #65 on: February 11, 2013, 11:08:56 AM »
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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #66 on: February 11, 2013, 12:07:05 PM »
nice! the shading on the hair is particularly good.
i think the shoulders may be a bit too rounded
lol i draw a TON of failures :P
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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #67 on: February 11, 2013, 07:01:38 PM »
*Flips his table*
TOMOKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =w=
Awesome... Just awesome.

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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #68 on: April 13, 2013, 06:50:14 AM »
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Re: Matas's Artworks (slight nudity)
« Reply #69 on: April 13, 2013, 12:06:37 PM »
Nice one matas! I forgot you can draw pretty well