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Author Topic: Shojo Shonen Comparison  (Read 10626 times)

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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #30 on: September 23, 2012, 11:28:06 AM »
He looks awesome  :thumbsup: Though the left hand is kinda off.. It looks as if he has 2 thumbs.. But the rest is great. Keep it up, ur improving :D

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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #31 on: October 02, 2012, 06:50:49 PM »
a quick sketch of Rin from Shuffle
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« Reply #32 on: October 02, 2012, 08:20:05 PM »
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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #33 on: October 04, 2012, 02:07:12 PM »
Well finally got the drivers for my tablet here a sketch I did in paint (may or may not finish since I suck with a tablet :/)


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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #34 on: October 04, 2012, 11:53:57 PM »
Okay, If ur going to finish it, here's a few critiques:
The right arm is not connected at all, and it feels as though its floating. Also the hand is too small.
I'm guessing u tried perspective with the left arm. If so, then the hand is still the same size as the right hand. It should be smaller to give the feeling of true perspective. Also, the arm, in this perspective, should get thinner and thinner as u reach the hand, but urs is the same saize all the way. It doesn't look as if he has his arm facing the other direction, it just looks as if he has a very tiny arm.
I can't really tell what's happening behind the legs, but its okay since its just a sketch I guess..
Sorry if I sounded too harsh -_- all u need is practice ;) maybe try fixing it?
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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #35 on: October 05, 2012, 02:02:32 AM »
Heres a finished version I did in pencil and you werent being harsh I welcome the tips :D also behind the leg was a bag and the rest of the leg and a shoe but I left the bag out of this one Hope you guys like it :D also this one I left the perspective out

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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #36 on: October 05, 2012, 09:46:26 AM »
Wow you did a lot better ^-^. Now I'd like to say something about the face. You need to be sure the face is symmetrical since the face is equal to itself. The nose is pretty much the center lining for any normal human head. With that being said the rest of the head should be symmetrical to this center line. The eyes should be the same distance, the mouth and chin  lined up in the middle of the line, etc.

In this drawing your eyes are at different heights and the nose seems off centered. Also you made his eyes look in different directions as if he had a lazy eye (unsure if this was the aim). Next time make sure they are looking at the same thing.

Overall the body looks a lot better, but you need more practice on the head. Make sure to use guidelines correctly so that you know where to place facial features. Gppd luck and keep up the good work.
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« Reply #37 on: October 05, 2012, 10:29:42 AM »
Yeah I see what you were talking about Thanks for the tips :D
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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #38 on: October 05, 2012, 11:29:26 AM »
Your welcome
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« Reply #39 on: October 05, 2012, 05:03:16 PM »
Here's a side view I did in my new sketchpad :D I also got a scanner now so I don't have to use my sisters anymore! *Drawn with Black Dixon Ticonderoga

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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #40 on: October 06, 2012, 01:34:54 AM »
Looks good. The only problem I see is the neck, its inclined in a wrong way methinks.

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« Reply #41 on: October 06, 2012, 03:59:36 PM »
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« Reply #42 on: October 06, 2012, 04:34:22 PM »
Oh! thanks for pointing that out P4 I didn't catch that
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« Reply #43 on: October 07, 2012, 11:10:12 PM »
First ever manga painting :D (well at least the first one I ever finished :3) Hope you guys like it :D



I used paint tool sai to paint it
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Re: Shojo Shonen Comparison
« Reply #44 on: October 07, 2012, 11:41:17 PM »
Hey that's pretty good perspective. But the eyes look as if they were just painted on his face, instead of looking real. Also the thumb is too thick. Theses are the only major problems I see. Keep it up.