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Author Topic: Hurray for cliche' character design!!!  (Read 1006 times)

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Offline Saifer Emmerich

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Hurray for cliche' character design!!!
« on: June 20, 2012, 08:44:07 PM »
One of my characters for a comedy/adventure i'm working on with a friend.
Its badly photographed with my crappy crappy old phone!!

Be Cruel!!

Break my bones.
Steal my scones.
But please don't take me home...

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Re: Hurray for cliche' character design!!!
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2012, 08:46:03 PM »
Be cruel? Okay XD It looks like a bad ass version of young link. Definetely awesome. It's as much as I can say as I'm not an artsit. I'm sure they'll find the flaws you're looking for ;D
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Re: Hurray for cliche' character design!!!
« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2012, 08:52:53 PM »
Sir, comparing this "mediocronstrosity" to the intricate design of one of the most memorable characters of my childhood can only be described a a drunken man's cry for help... i suggest you lay off the bottle!

And, thanks for the compliment dude!!  :thumbsup:
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Re: Hurray for cliche' character design!!!
« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2012, 09:33:20 PM »
Alright, if you want me to tear it apart sure I will ;)                                                                                               

One eye's a different shape/size than the other. The eyebrows are also uneven.
The shoulders aren't even(his left shoulder is also more correct), the legs don't look like they connect to the torso(fix this by drawing a mannequin/underdrawing/basic anatomy before drawing clothes). The top clothes look like a bit 2D for free-flowing clothes. Gotta add the whole sleeve, especially for his left arm(draw the back of the sleeve, basically).
Gotta add more definition/creases to the pants to make the tufts flowing in the wind more believable. His left shoe also looks too wide, and the top of the left shoe should swoop like the top of the right shoe. Some more tattering on the top, like on the pants, would also be a good idea.

No terrible errors or anything, overall a pretty good drawing  :D Just gotta work on the creases and wrinkles in the clothes.

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Re: Hurray for cliche' character design!!!
« Reply #4 on: June 21, 2012, 09:26:29 AM »
In addition to master nexuun's insights:

1. forehead seems so small  :noyoudon't:
2. sword is crooked  :noyoudon't:
3. I don't see a link resemblance but i seem to visualize him as a final fantasy character... (on which i'm a fan of)
4. Line density seems to be fine  :thumbsup:
5. Kid type body seems to fit his image  :thumbsup:

Total = Satisfactory

Suggestion: Draw it again with changes from our opinions and i'll give you two thumbs up  :doublethumbs: and force  :xmasgifts: to give you a cookie. :winner: Ganbatte!  :biggrin:

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Re: Hurray for cliche' character design!!!
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2012, 06:00:33 PM »
heHehehehee...  :biggrin:
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Re: Hurray for cliche' character design!!!
« Reply #6 on: June 23, 2012, 11:34:57 AM »
I'm seeing him as more of like Zidane from Final Fantasy 9 rather than Link

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Re: Hurray for cliche' character design!!!
« Reply #7 on: June 23, 2012, 04:51:36 PM »
I really like it, it's extremely cute!