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Offline ThorOdinson

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The 8 Pearls
« on: June 19, 2012, 01:52:12 PM »
This is my Manga story. I'm new here and hopefully people give me some advice

The 8 Pearls
Long time ago there once lived a beautiful women name Tomiko. Tomiko was loved a crossed the land. Tomiko was a kind hearted women who treated everyone with respect and dignity. The only people she hated was criminals, any type for that matter,  any one who did the wrongdoing she hated them so much. Then one day she was fed up with the criminals around the world and she wanted to do something about it. So Tomiko Created these 8 Magical pearls each with different elements and powers, She created fire, earth, water, air, light, shadow, nature, and lightning. But what Tomiko didn't know was that in the pearls there were Demons that purses them. One night a thief broke into her house and stole the 8 pearls and ran into the woods. There the Pearl somehow was activated and the 8 Demons were free, the holy light was so powerful that the thief was exterminated right there. The 8 Demons were veaking Havoc across the land, destroying anything that came in sight and soon there were going to destroy the world. Tomiko thought if she created them she can somehow stop them. So she sacrificed her self in order to stop the demons, the demons went back into the pearls and was scattered across the world where no one can find them again, Until now... 

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Re: The 8 Pearls
« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2012, 02:32:28 PM »
Interesting plot, are there any documents that the main character will be able to utilize to know about the 8 pearls you know a journal or some drawings markings on a building or something? Or will you just have one of the pearls release its demon again and that will alert your main character(s) know of the powerful artifacts?

I like the premise I hope your working on this and will have more for us to read  :heart:
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Re: The 8 Pearls
« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2012, 01:34:17 PM »
@ Nyxy

yes im still working on it. And the way the main character will find out by a mysterious Witch, She will know a lot about this stuff and will teach him about the pearls and its histroy.

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Re: The 8 Pearls
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2012, 06:42:05 PM »
I was so sure i replied in this though... but i guess nyxy said what i was thinking already

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Re: The 8 Pearls
« Reply #4 on: August 01, 2012, 01:09:52 PM »
It does sound very interesting, I do have one point though. Nature is inherently considered to include the four elements and all life so I'm not sure what you mean. Is nature biological life or plants or mother nature? How is it different than the other elements that is already encompassed in its makeup.