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Moosie's idea
« on: February 20, 2012, 01:58:25 PM »
I dont know , this is just a thought, but i think my next work of manga should be a "yuri horror story"
When i was about idk around 15 years old, i studied in "ripperology", (researching and coming up with my own theories about the "Whitechapel Murders" that took place in 1888 by the notorious Jack the Ripper.)
I was thinking (now this is just a crazy idea) maybe i could remake the legend of Jack the Ripper and turn it into a dramatic, gory, yuri-filled masterpeice.  I thought i should make Jack a hot sexy lesbian who has her way with girls and then kills them...*drools*:D But then again, that's just me. I stood up all night yesterday frantically writing down the plot and the first two chapters. Sadly, i dont have them right now, but ill update you guys with the info. Besides that, tell me, is it a good idea?  :hmm:
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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2012, 02:17:52 PM »
Well.. It's different lol definitely a unique kind of story. It doesnt sound bad though just a new idea. I'd give it a shot since Jack the ripper is sorta interesting.
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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2012, 02:28:44 PM »
Sounds incredibly interesting.

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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2012, 03:00:13 PM »
  I thought i should make Jack a hot sexy lesbian who has her way with girls and then kills them...*drools*:D

This alone sounds like a great story! When can I start reading?  hehe :blush:
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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2012, 03:29:01 PM »
  I thought i should make Jack a hot sexy lesbian who has her way with girls and then kills them...*drools*:D




Enough said.

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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #5 on: February 20, 2012, 03:45:45 PM »
I thought i should make Jack a hot sexy lesbian who has her way with girls and then kills them...*drools*:D:


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« Reply #6 on: February 20, 2012, 03:55:51 PM »
I thought i should make Jack a hot sexy lesbian who has her way with girls and then kills them...*drools*:D

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« Reply #7 on: February 20, 2012, 04:05:03 PM »
Yo all I have to say is one thing about your little idea...



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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #8 on: February 20, 2012, 06:25:56 PM »
I wont reply like everyone else xD but I think that's a pretty interesting twist on a source of media that's been used a bunch of times already. I look forward to it.
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« Reply #9 on: February 20, 2012, 07:12:16 PM »
we know you're thinking it though

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« Reply #10 on: February 20, 2012, 07:14:54 PM »
we know you're thinking it though

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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #11 on: February 20, 2012, 07:19:36 PM »
Now now, I'd be giving an actual critique of the idea now.

The idea is indeed pretty good, and I DARE say that it feeds on fetishes, many many fetishes, just like most ecchi mangas do anyway, so there's nothing wrong with that. Fetishes sell you know.

However, for an idea to be something else than mindless fanservice (which is actually a bad thing if you want an actual story), you'll need a strong and interesting lead character, and you also need to make the Fem Ripper interesting and mysterious (and BLOODY HOT) character too.

Investigating the setting and time period is also crucial! There's a lot of homework before setting out to write the history.

Those are just my 2 feti- I mean cents.
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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #12 on: February 20, 2012, 07:31:50 PM »
hai hai. monster is right in all regards. researching the history will be key. you're going to need to get the key feel of the city if you want to pull it off.

make sure to research each of the victims individually as well. see if you can extract personalities for each of them.

and on a final note. depending on how hot and heavy this thing get's. you're going to need to spoiler the *censored* out of it. also frankly i'm not sure how hasith or co will react. they may ask you to move it to our sister site. but again it's all speculation. lord knows ecchiworld could use some more business though.

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« Reply #13 on: February 20, 2012, 07:48:22 PM »
I agree. As I said the Jack the Ripper story has been retold a bunch of times already and after thinking about it something similar to your idea has already been done. Not exactly but if you've ever read Black Butler "Jack the Ripper" was actually a duo of a man and women, and since these women were all prostitutes anyway its ambiguous to wither or not something ecchi was done to them anyway. Depends on which depiction of the story your looking at.

I'm all for the idea but some real thought will have to go into it to avoid what was already said by Coryn and Monsterful  and to avoid it from just becoming another expanded Jack the Ripper Story. 
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Re: Moosie's idea
« Reply #14 on: February 21, 2012, 03:16:27 AM »
That's the fun part, since it's so unknown and there have been so many different views on the story, that you can pretty much make up your own (as long as it fits in the boundaries of the actual happenings at the Whitechapel Murders).

I say go for it! We'll be able to critizise more once you've got something written down.
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