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Author Topic: Darling be Home Soon  (Read 12116 times)

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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #195 on: April 18, 2014, 07:52:10 PM »
What is even going on here

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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #196 on: April 19, 2014, 12:23:58 AM »
chit chat... Sorry...  :blush:  :ninja:

Oh.. I mean! Lego, get back to work you good for nothing! I thought I told you not to get off topic.. *pretends that I  had nothing to do with it.*
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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #197 on: June 22, 2014, 03:13:01 AM »
I really dont know why, but instead of pulling an all- nighter on reading Tower of God like how I originally planned, i decided to spend the last two hours giving this a full re-read.                                                                                                                                                                             I like this story even more now after reading through it a second time. Though I have to say that this time around the ending didn't give me a lot of satisfaction. I kind of feel like that everything was so sudden. Especially the pep talk scene between hasith and MR tan. Still I liked everything overall so you get a thumbs up from me regardless.                                                                                                                                                                                 So i guess this is the part where I shower you with thumbs up emoticons. You inspired to me to get to working on my own stuff again so you deserve it. I tried writing the third chapter for  my mr cannon but I punked out after 300 words or so. Hopefully this story will give me the spark I need.
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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #198 on: June 22, 2014, 03:20:44 AM »
Random read is random, but interesting haha. Go for it man, that origin story thing didn't work out for me, but I finished at least.

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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #199 on: June 22, 2014, 03:30:30 AM »
well im a perfectionsit (or at least try to be) so i tend to spend a lot of time thinking instead of actually doing. But once im finished with getting my butt kicked by my inner editor i definitely hop back to it.
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« Reply #200 on: June 22, 2014, 03:35:34 AM »
 The inner editor is really a problem sometimes. So tired of developing stories, they only grow and die up in my mind anyways, better to just write.

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« Reply #201 on: June 22, 2014, 04:01:43 AM »
yeah i understand where your coming from. But i dont know man. Even though i should be writing more, i like developing stories in my head. I find it more fun than staring at a blank computer screen. Oh well i guess just writing is better in the end
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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #202 on: June 22, 2014, 11:03:00 AM »
*sweeps ending under the rug*


yeah, i was never that proud of it either. I got in all the pieces that I wanted, but I never felt that I paced it right.


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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #203 on: June 24, 2018, 08:31:01 PM »
There, I finally read the whole thing, thanks to Fro's revival post. I'm going to try to hop around more MRverse stories to gather all the bits of lore I can use to my advantage in other situations.

It's so weird to see you guys talking about school and stuff. Yikes. Makes me feel old, somehow. Anyway, I can't be too critical of the roughness of the writing since this was about four to five years ago. It was a mostly fun little read, although I admit that I skimmed through some of the paragraphs rather than reading them because it felt like "stereotypical shounen discussion point, plot will continue in twenty seconds". (That's always been one of my difficulties in keeping up with all of MRverse, second to the fact that there's just so much).

I guess this explains my previous confusion about MR-tan's appearance. With the photobucket links that were up (before they got shut down), I may have gotten her confused with the orange raindrop design since even then there were still some issues.

Tell you what. If you can PM me descriptions of all the Tans in their current incarnation, I'll try to see if I can do a digital shot of all of them together, like a family photo or something. That way we can have a reference point.

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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #204 on: June 24, 2018, 08:54:02 PM »
Thanks for giving it a read! Yeah I hesitate to reread this on account of that writing skill. It was definitely a different time.

Oh snap! Yeah those photobucket links will need updating. We got some good references from the work on the VN, but I could definite do that. It would be nice to have a master sort of image with them all together.

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