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Author Topic: Just another drawing. critques are welcomed.  (Read 959 times)

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Offline Tshua

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Just another drawing. critques are welcomed.
« on: January 22, 2011, 01:54:37 PM »


Just a quick drwaing I did and colored quickly on gimp. I'm so bored........
Please tell me what I should work on.


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Re: Just another drawing. critques are welcomed.
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2011, 11:54:06 AM »
very interesting. love what you did with the words around the neck. always a fan of words incorporated into artwork.

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Re: Just another drawing. critques are welcomed.
« Reply #2 on: January 27, 2011, 01:28:24 PM »
Indeed, words are good.
I'd probably work a bit on the arms/hands. Maybe try to somehownot making the two sleeves look mixed.
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Re: Just another drawing. critques are welcomed.
« Reply #3 on: January 27, 2011, 01:34:58 PM »
Great piece of work! perhaps by using grey lines you could separate the arms, and then it would be perfect!

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Re: Just another drawing. critques are welcomed.
« Reply #4 on: June 10, 2011, 01:44:57 PM »
lovely love the detail love the girl awesmoe