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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #120 on: January 12, 2013, 01:06:16 AM »
I don't think the head shape is a problem. I mean, that style does exist in mangas. Now if suuper was going for more of a realistic approach, then yes it would be incorrect. ;-)

I think the arms need a little work though. They aren't structured quite right, as revealed by the elbow and wrist joints.
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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #121 on: January 12, 2013, 02:13:31 PM »
@ryan in real life yes its oval and stuff, but since this is a manga style i chose the head that i draw. at the moment i am fairly comfortable with the shape and proportions. when i work with other styles and going into more realism i will bear that in mind though thanks

@jp89 yes i had absolutely no idea what to do for the wrist. i will work on the arms a bit more, even getting the right proportions is a bit of a pain, but i think i am getting there :P
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« Reply #122 on: January 13, 2013, 11:17:43 AM »
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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #123 on: January 13, 2013, 01:58:03 PM »
You have improved   a lot since the first drawings you posted.

The shoulders and  breast proportions need to be worked on but  the drawing is cute.

Keep working!

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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #124 on: January 13, 2013, 02:26:51 PM »
thanks!
i have a hard time drawing shoulders consistently :P
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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #125 on: January 14, 2013, 04:11:59 PM »
The torso seems a little short with the one on the right. Make sure you are sketching out basic proportional guidelines before you start actually drawing in the character. ;-)
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« Reply #126 on: January 14, 2013, 10:53:11 PM »
This last drawing is really cute. Proportions maybe very slightly out but I don't think it's very noticeable. Keep drawing !

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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #127 on: January 15, 2013, 12:48:28 PM »
@jp yes i always draw the basic shape in first, but with only half a character it can often go a bit wrong as i cant draw the rest to check the proportions against.

@hasith thanks, most of my drawings dont turn out as cute as i would like though!

latest stuff i did today in lunch break, chains and some doodling over my notes in class, which is a bit rare (normally i get out my blank paper but i was kinda in a lesson). plus one which turned out kinda okish, although i didnt finish it :P





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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #128 on: January 15, 2013, 03:27:48 PM »
It's nice to see you can vary the head shape, I've always struggled with that...
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« Reply #129 on: January 15, 2013, 03:44:03 PM »
ermmmm well i always try and draw it the same, it just ends up .... different :P
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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #130 on: January 17, 2013, 03:18:54 PM »
latest, quite a realistic one for me

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« Reply #131 on: January 22, 2013, 01:04:37 PM »
latest again, a bit of shorthand in there as well i was practising :P



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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #132 on: January 23, 2013, 12:30:48 AM »
Good work

Very heartfelt, Jamie.

Nice job on the practice, Suuper. You're definitely making progress. I didn't quite see it before, but the chains are awesome. I was flabbergasted when I saw them; I couldn't do better. Your proportions are better, and your eyes definitely carry more depth. Keep it up!
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« Reply #133 on: January 24, 2013, 12:26:54 PM »
thanks!
the chains were very simply drawn, i just drew a series of ovals like this

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then quickly scribbled three lines in like an N would do

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like that but touching :P
i noticed i forgot to finish the seat of the swing, whoops :P
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Re: Suuper's manga (now includes digital!)
« Reply #134 on: January 29, 2013, 11:01:34 AM »
havnt uploaded anything in a while, mostly as i have been copying stuff i dont really fell it counts as my own work. heres a few faces



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