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Re: Life at Sea
« Reply #15 on: June 27, 2011, 01:29:13 PM »
you're all playing into my hands...so perfectly. just thought you ought to know.

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Re: Life at Sea
« Reply #16 on: June 27, 2011, 01:40:27 PM »
ah man, that doesn't sound good >.<

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« Reply #17 on: June 27, 2011, 01:49:15 PM »
it does to me

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Re: Life at Sea
« Reply #18 on: June 28, 2011, 12:56:13 AM »
Thats enough ou two.

Heres Caesar's Destiny, so far. Im still working on the ship and Oran hasnt given me a reference yet, but I think I'll get a jump on the Red Dragon's Breath....

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« Reply #19 on: June 28, 2011, 06:11:55 AM »
Haha awesome doodle, that's exactly what I was thinking o_o

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« Reply #20 on: June 28, 2011, 01:51:10 PM »
Hahaha! nice doodle! perfect, just perfect! i like how you differentiated us with little symbols and stuff.

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« Reply #21 on: June 28, 2011, 04:01:34 PM »
cheers guys :D I'll be making some slight changes with the final piece, I'm really just waiting on Oran... but until then, I'll start on Red Dragon's crew :)

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« Reply #22 on: June 28, 2011, 04:29:20 PM »
Really brings out the whole event, i feel so jolly right now. Really great render Doodler!

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« Reply #23 on: June 28, 2011, 07:04:58 PM »
Thanks everybody!

Heres the final one!


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« Reply #24 on: June 28, 2011, 07:07:40 PM »
iiiiii LIKE IT!

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« Reply #25 on: June 28, 2011, 07:09:04 PM »
GR8T WORK DOODLE!!!!!!!!


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« Reply #26 on: June 28, 2011, 07:11:48 PM »
Glad you guys like it xD

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« Reply #27 on: June 28, 2011, 10:04:45 PM »
hahah awesome XD

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« Reply #28 on: June 28, 2011, 10:35:21 PM »
Cheers aero!

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Re: Life at Sea
« Reply #29 on: June 29, 2011, 03:13:00 AM »
chapter three and such and such.


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   Midday on The Caesar’s Destiny. The crew are busy swabbing the deck as doodle mans

the wheel. Coryn had been locked away in his cabin since dawn, with strict orders not to be

disturb. Suddenly however his cabin doors flew open simultaneously to reveal the bottom of

Coryn’s boot. Quickly following it up with the rest of his body, Coryn made a quick pace

towards the quarter deck with a massive piece of rolled parchment in his hand. “RIGHT! ALL

OF YOU DROP WHAT YOU’RE DOIN AND FOLLOW ME!” The crew quickly dropped their

mops and hurried after Coryn. By the time they had made it up to the quarter deck Coryn had

already set a small wooden table just behind the wheel and spun around. “So I have good news

and bad news. The good news!” Coryn slammed the parchment into the table. “Is that I know

where we’re going!” Oran’s eye twitched. “Are you telling me you didn’t before?”

“Kinda.”

   Spinning back around Coryn unfurled the parchment with a single flick of his wrist.

Showing that the parchment was in fact navigational charts. This which hand scrawled notes and

drawings of sea monsters. As the crew leaned in to get a better look however they noticed

something especially odd about the map. Monster was the first to bring it up. “Coryn…I couldn’t

help but notice that I don’t recognize any of these land masses.”

“Well good. Ifyoudidwe’dprobablyhavetoscanyourbrainforanymicrogeneticalterations.”

“Could you say that again but slower?”

“You probably don’t want me to.” Monster opened his mouth as if to say something else but

seemed to decide against it. Lego however spoke in his steed. “I still don’t get why we don’t

recognize anything on this map.” Coryn chuckled at him but suddenly took on a disappointed

tone. “Seriously? It’s like you think we’re on Earth or something.”

“We’re not on Earth?” Picking up the corners of the map, Coryn lifted it a few inches into the air

as if to make it more apparent. “Well obviously.” Aero interjected. “Could we get back to the

part where you didn’t know where we were going?”

“Not important anymore! I do now and that’s enough. Really what I want to know is why you

aren’t you asking me for the bad news.” Doodle rolled her eyes and turned away from the wheel.

“What’s the bad news captain?” Coryn smiled. “Finally a crew member with some sense. The

bad news First Mate Doodle, is that we know where we’re going.” Oran’s eye started twitching

again. “Please start making sense.”

“Oh if you insist.”

   Swinging over to the other side of the table, Coryn re-orientated the map and started

tracing lines on it with his finger. We started at this port here. Sailed south for a day and a half

which has landed us squarely here. Somewhere here.” Coryn tapped his finger on what appeared

as open ocean on the map. “Is Penitence Island. Home of Mercury Bay. Which also happens to

be the only safe place to anchor within a hundred leagues of the island. Or so the legends go. Our

immediate problem is here.” Coryn drew a circle several inches around the place he had pointed

out as Penitence Island. “This is something called the rift. Starting at the 45 degree of latitude on

its northern edge. Now the details are sketchy, but according to the tales, the rift is a gateway to a

section of the ocean that has never been charted. And it’s only open for three days, every 100

years.” Aero looked up at him only half convinced. “So what’s the issue?”

“Well for one it’s going to close the day after tomorrow. So if we don’t make good time we’ll

miss our chance. But that’s not the half of it. There’s an old saying that goes along with the

legend. ‘Many have gone by chance. More have gone by greed. Though all, by misfortune. Cross

the rift with all one carries, or many, you will by sea bury.’” An ominous feeling fell over the

crew, and even Coryn’s face darkened. “I’m afraid that if we don’t figure out its meaning within

the time limit. We’ll just become another part of the legend as well.” As Coryn started rolling up

the map Aero spoke. “So why the sudden urge to fill us in?”

“Well if I told you much later we’d be in a pretty sore spot hm? Since the rift hasn’t been open

for 100 years there isn’t anyone alive who can tell us what it is. Therefore you must be

prepared.”

   Coryn finished rolling up the map and secured it shut with a piece of string. “Two days

gentlemen! In two days I want you four to know this ship from top to bottom! Tip to stern! If you

don’t it will doom us all! You can be sure of that! And if we do survive they’ll be even worse

hell to go through!” Finishing his speech Coryn continued to stare at the crew for a few

moments. “WHAT ARE YOU ALL STARING AT ME FOR?! BACK TO WORK YOU

DOGS!” As the crew ran off back to their tasks, Coryn leaned against the railing as Doodle made

slight adjustments to their heading, feeling the wind as she did. After staring at his back for

several moments she finally spoke up. “Something on your mind Captain?” Without taking his

eyes off the horizon he responded. “You shouldn’t have thrown out the rum.”


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