So basicly I was chillin and then i thought of a rough idea.
The story is introduced by several scenes.
At the scene of a kidnap Two criminals drag the innocent 15 year old girl and dash her in the back of the boot tied up in duck tape, 2AM midnight. At these times Ace (MAIN CHACRACTER) was busy chasing gangsters who tried to rob a local store. No he wasnt a police or a cop neither a detective. But he always thought himself as being a hero because he grew up watching cop films and super hero movies and became inspired. Ace was only a mere young 15 year old but had potentiall skills but he never showed it becuase he doesnt know his own strengths yet.
Meanwhile a boy named Change was camping outside a game store to get the new edition of the famous massive multiplayer online game called Core soul online. Sleep was a waste of time for him so he kept banging out his portable hand held console that he charged the day before all day. He enjoyed video games but then while he was having so much fun a mean thug from the local gang called ''Money motivation'' snatched it out his hand. And said '' Blood Gimme that before i stab you'' then as he snatched it out his hand. The unarmed hero Ace arrived with no talents or skills whatsoever except for running and bluffing.
The gangster boy thought ace he was an undercover cop so he didnt want to stop at any risk he put the game in his pocket and started speeding off in the dark. Ace promised Change he would get his game back for him, so Ace followed after Remi, untill he turned a corner and there was no one but them two in a alley way. Remi started to doubt Ace as an officail and picked up a pole, ''Hey pig wheres youre gun use it if youre bad''.
Ace didnt have a gun neither a tazer or a club. He had no weapon and he was about to be found out. Everyone thought he was a undercover neighbour hood cop, ''Hey pig, why you stalling arrest me then''. Ace was confused and didnt know what to do. Ace was liturally screwed he had no way out of it and he didnt know what to do. Remii so the fear in his eyes and crept closer to him, in the suspension Ace was shivering in fear, all those times of pretending to be a cop and look whats happened to him now.
Remii aproaches him taking a knife out of his underwear and holding it to Ace's face. He whispers in his ear '' This is what you get for stuntin on the real G's''. Then he holds the knife up.'' with this short blade. I will end youre life, the roads are cold kid and your paying the price.'' he thrust the knife in his stomach and blood drips. Ace his eyes widen and his face becomes pale, he then galls to the ground. With his eyes closed and blood dripping out everywhere.
As the young boy falls to his dreadful death he feels an aproach. And a white light is shone towards him coming from the end of the alleyway. Was he in heaven? there was a voice of a little girl singing, then the voice became clearer and as it does time started to freeze she came closer and closer to him and finally she came to him. And held his hand, then the light shone everywhere. And everything was going back the blood went back into his stomach his clothes sewed up and time went back to the time when he chased remi into the alleyway.
Lets retry things, as remii ran into the alleyway so did ace, but this time ace jumped on one of the ladders that went ontop of the roof. Ace stood there waiting without a plan he knew what he was going to do already. Remii sought this out '' Is this what you plan on doing? cuase it's not going to work if you think im that stupid.'' Remii implied. And ace was left there to stare at him without a reply,Remi acknowledged the 10 second silence he took the knife out of his ankle strap. Then walked closely to him, closer , closer , closer Ace walked back a bit , then a bit, and a bit. But he only cornered himself into the edge. This was his second chance to live. Theres a small chance he will get another one his life has summed up to the last chapter and the curtains are closing.
Remii takes out the knife and pulls it to ace,'' You see this is what you get for messin wit the real G's the streets aint a place to mess around wit especiially at this time of the day, Youre not even a cop! Dis punk wasted ma time in my hood, nah you know who i am il waste you biatch. Anything to say?''. He didnt reply ace was to shocked I mean what was ace thinking pretending to be a hero and chasing bad guys around with nothing but a toy bb gun he bought of some weird salesman.
The atmostphere was tense and the air got thick, heart rates where increasing in only a short minute of silence. Remii gripped the Handle of the short kitchen blade tightley and grabbed ace's chest with the other hand. Thien he pushed his hand forward to slice through his skin. But in midway he stopped, his eyes widened, and Ace opened his eyes and looked at remii suprised. Then he released his gripp on the blade, and looks down only to see another blade going right through his back into his stomach. It was just stock there, no one senced a third apearence. It was a mystery, Remi's eyes dulled and his pupil vanished. His eyes rolled up, his eyelids closed and he lost his breath as he crumbled to the floor. The man who runned the streets, finnaly fell to his death. After all those he killed but who was it? Ace widened his eyes and a lightning bolt went right through his body as he was shocked to see who it was. Out of all people how could it be, this person....
So who do you think it is???
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