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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #30 on: February 21, 2011, 08:35:23 PM »
sorta yeah kinda. technical difficulties i guess you could say.

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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #31 on: February 21, 2011, 08:43:51 PM »
Hmmm....what kind of difficulities if u dont mind me asking? And DO you plan to publish anthology 3?

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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #32 on: February 21, 2011, 09:12:53 PM »
well yes. but there was some sort of formatting mass error something or another. at least i think. ask co for the specifics but the general idea is that it's getting there

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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #33 on: February 22, 2011, 06:48:59 PM »
Here is page 9 and 10 .( Don't forget to say what you think after you read it, otherwise I am going to be very SAD ;( )




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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #34 on: February 24, 2011, 08:13:28 AM »
Ok. we are getting to the plot do not worry !!!!



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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #35 on: February 24, 2011, 09:06:37 AM »
lol great expressions!
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,8367.0.html

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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #36 on: February 25, 2011, 08:04:20 AM »
Ok here is the next page (lol i am posting on two topics) ANywaay the cute girls are finally here (Well  i do not know about one of them) (But no spoilers ;p )


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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #37 on: February 25, 2011, 12:38:03 PM »
And suddenly: Huge improvement to the art. xD

I like how it is progressing but I feel that the beginning was a bit rushed. A little background to the story would be nice to give us a clue as to why they are fighting or at least why the guy with the tattoo is. It can be simple with silhouettes that give a basis as to what the Island of Fighters is. There are other methods as well, I'm just too lazy to list them. xD
I'm back~~~

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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #38 on: February 25, 2011, 02:10:10 PM »
Awww, awww ,awww thank you! arigatou !!!! To be fair it will be all explained later on but I can give u some clues... The tattoo guy attacked the other one cuz he didnot want to go to the island of the figters on his own cuz the journey is too dangerous ,full off traps and opponents and even thou he cut the other guys face the other guy ,didint have choice not to go cuz he have no future in this town and his only the best skills are martial arts(he was also poor so he had to work as waiter)... and well no more spoilers why they go there but here you go with next pages!!





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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #40 on: February 25, 2011, 07:24:51 PM »
wtf again :


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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #41 on: February 26, 2011, 12:31:48 PM »
Next 2 pages:




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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #42 on: February 26, 2011, 01:23:01 PM »
Things look lot better now. A great improvement, Paulina ! Congrats !

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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #43 on: February 26, 2011, 01:36:49 PM »
Thank You for Congratulations ^ ^ Arigatou!!!!Is my grammar ok thou?

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Re: Island of the fighters
« Reply #44 on: March 02, 2011, 11:59:41 AM »
oh! o can't wait to see more!
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,8367.0.html

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