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Author Topic: Undeadturkey's Gallery  (Read 1566 times)

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Offline undeadturkey

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Undeadturkey's Gallery
« on: January 31, 2011, 05:46:07 PM »
Here's some of my art work, Comments and Critiques are appreciated!








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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 08:05:34 PM »
pretty good! i like the lineart. not the best artist here so i'll let the others give some more specific critiques

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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 08:50:15 PM »
Thanks alot man.

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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2011, 10:11:41 PM »
nice!
my favorite was the dragon and woman.
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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 04:15:09 PM »
Not bad for a beginning! Maybe you should add some details to the eyes but the drawings are neat and clear. Keep drawing!

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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 11:44:17 PM »
Thanks! Yeah, I'd have to agree. It's been something iver been trying to work on.

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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #6 on: February 03, 2011, 11:52:55 PM »
It's great to see that you don't try to hide things that are difficult to draw. That's a major plus in improving.

Your art is pretty good but there are a few proportion issues with the face and shoulders. With practice, you will have these issues resolved in no time. Keep up the great work! =)
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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #7 on: February 04, 2011, 08:18:08 AM »
Thanks a lot. I will try to work those things out asap.

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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #8 on: February 04, 2011, 08:37:41 AM »
The images really try to show something, and a lot of effort has clearly been put into them, but you have to be careful with using so much 'burn' 'dodge' but seriously to me, that's inconsequential, i like all of the art. Can't add much though apart from this.

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Re: Undeadturkey's Gallery
« Reply #9 on: February 04, 2011, 08:41:45 AM »
Thanks, yeah I do go a little crazy with burn and dodge sometimes lol.