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Offline Iris

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #30 on: November 03, 2011, 03:27:08 PM »
nice drawings, and I think I would do it by how tall they are and how you want the rest of their body to look like; and male shoulders are broader than female ones
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #31 on: June 20, 2012, 09:51:40 AM »
Guess who's back? XD

So I have left and brought myself a tablet and some serious anatomy practice. Well sort of. Here are some pictures, please give more improvements so I can become a better artist and thanks for all the advice already!



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Re: Improved?
« Reply #32 on: June 20, 2012, 12:35:53 PM »
It sure does look like you've improved! You might know this already but when the arm is hanging down loosely the elbow is usually located at the bottom of the rib cage/near the navel. In order to get a feel for the elbow location of different arm poses, use arching lines as guidelines for the arms at the elbow and hand locations.

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #33 on: June 20, 2012, 01:01:50 PM »
It's better bit there are some corrections to make: the girl "praying" has a mistake in the eyes: they aren't symetrical, the  girl at the top right corner has a too long neck. The boy/man head in profile at the left has a problem: the ear and the skull need to be corrected.
The girl who has her hands in her hips is great but one eye is strange.

It's not that bad, keep working!

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #34 on: June 20, 2012, 08:11:31 PM »
Wow, definitely. You've come a long way dude! I ish jealous :)

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #35 on: June 30, 2012, 07:47:00 AM »
The characters remind me of a story i tried to begin and stopped writing. They look interesting, that's for sure, and i love the sketchiness, for now i guess you should get used to using guidelines and be able to consistently draw the same height of each character using the head-body ratio

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #36 on: August 11, 2012, 11:57:22 AM »
Here's some more I've been doing. I hope I have took your advices to heart. :3







« Last Edit: August 11, 2012, 12:02:38 PM by zioxiezhai »
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #37 on: August 11, 2012, 01:29:27 PM »
Hmmm.. i can definitely see some improvement in anatomy. Hands still need work but defnitely uve improved. keep it up ;D

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #38 on: August 13, 2012, 09:20:42 AM »
Agreed - This is such a huge improvement. Keep it up. I specially like the drawing where the guy is being hugged by the creature.

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #39 on: August 21, 2012, 09:04:05 AM »
Wow just looked at your first post compared to your recent work. A definite improvement. Keep up the progression and you'll have some awesome stuff coming your way.

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #40 on: September 07, 2012, 10:24:40 AM »
It's been a month now and here's another one. I've been doing my art digitally these days and I'm trying to get used to colouring.



« Last Edit: September 07, 2012, 10:30:43 AM by zioxiezhai »
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #41 on: September 07, 2012, 11:01:23 AM »
Work on your jaw lines. They are usually curved and dropped down lower than what you have see reference for example.

Also your feet are a tad small.
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #42 on: September 09, 2012, 04:56:40 PM »
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #43 on: September 11, 2012, 11:58:25 AM »
To make it easier, the ear starts at the end of the jaw, and its parallel to the nose, not the eyebrows  :glare:

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #44 on: October 16, 2012, 05:10:05 AM »
Some Base colours on a sketch I've been doing....



There are some mistakes here and there... Xd
Again thanks for the advice again! I hope I fixed the chin thing. But now it's ears, the sizes NOOOOO!!! XD
« Last Edit: October 16, 2012, 05:22:40 AM by zioxiezhai »
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