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Re: Help, my manga looks weird...
« Reply #15 on: December 11, 2010, 02:25:09 PM »
well yes people tend to be quite fleshy

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Re: Help, my manga looks weird...
« Reply #16 on: December 11, 2010, 04:54:20 PM »
well yes people tend to be quite fleshy
Yes, quite fleshy indeed
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Re: Help, my manga looks weird...
« Reply #17 on: December 11, 2010, 05:03:18 PM »
Very fleshy.
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« Reply #18 on: January 01, 2011, 08:24:22 AM »
I started going through lots of tutorials for manga over the internet and practiced and practiced over them. So here are the results! TA-DA! My scanner wasn't running so I had to use the Iphone :(.





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Re: Improved?
« Reply #19 on: January 01, 2011, 08:48:39 AM »
I had to merge your new and old topics because each member can have only one topic per Art Board.

About your drawings I think you have improved but yet you need to work on body anatomy. That is the hardest thing.

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #20 on: January 01, 2011, 12:12:02 PM »
Oh thanks.
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #21 on: January 01, 2011, 05:49:16 PM »
not a bad start but one big problem you seem to be having is simple anatomy. your characters are really stick like. theres no curves or anything. i would suggest looking up some tutorials on how to just draw a basic human body.

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #22 on: January 05, 2011, 02:47:27 PM »
The drawings are not bad but you can imrpove them by using the circles method. Sketch quickly your characters using rectangles and circles before adding more details. It will help to improve your drawings! Keep drawing!

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #23 on: January 28, 2011, 05:04:59 PM »
More pictures! Sorry I've been off for quite a while. But anyways, these characters are from my A.I artificial intelligence story. The girl is ALicia and the boy is the main character.






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Re: Improved?
« Reply #24 on: January 28, 2011, 06:55:28 PM »
Generally your characters are too long in it. Seriously this should be your main focus!
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #25 on: January 28, 2011, 07:25:08 PM »
 i'm liking the legs of the first character? but where are her feet? lol

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #26 on: January 28, 2011, 07:31:16 PM »
Agree with Dawood, the legs for the girl are nicely designed. However, the legs for everyone is awkwardly proportioned. It looks like they're on stilts.

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Re: Improved?
« Reply #27 on: January 30, 2011, 04:40:36 PM »
Everytime I tried to make them (The legs) shorter they look young :/ so I don't know how to fix that... Any ideas? Also the body always turn out small....
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #28 on: January 30, 2011, 04:42:37 PM »
You should look at the anatomy of male human bodies. The features that make one older or younger are usually the shoulders, since the legs are usually very short.
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Re: Improved?
« Reply #29 on: May 10, 2011, 11:16:39 AM »
I was wondering, is it the longer the shoulders the older they are? Or is it the shorter they are?
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