BLACK PINE H: MR

[eldritchmaestro]

That'd be a life saver. I'll definately take you up on that offer, if attempt it.

[Coryn]

i say do it. after all everybody loves the MR based stories.

[Tostificer]

Speaking of which, what happened to the Raiders story thing?

[Coryn]

well that was litt. you'll have to ask him. hit up the topic or pm him though.

[Account Disabled]

I got bored.

Will it be zombies again? Cause I think there should definitely be a different theme if you're gonna do a sequel lego. Just a suggestion though.

[eldritchmaestro]

Well then i'll most likely go ahead with it. I'll ask in at the Discussion table when i'm up to it. Say... one week? Two? Or even less.

Yeah i think a different theme would be nice as well, but i'm not too sure as the other themes would have to focus on character more most-likely, and i aint good with that. The zombies made for good distractions!!

[Coryn]

well kajin could be doing other crazy *censored* and teh zombies could be a part of it. but not necisarily the whole issue

[eldritchmaestro]

hmm... maybe i'll try from that angle. I'll just begin drafting basic ideas, then i'll show them to you to discuss and hammer some things out

[Coach Fro]

Okay so I finally got around to reading this and man I'm so happy that I did! This was a job well done, Lego. Lots of suspense and chest clenching moments. I'm also glad this continuation explained the reasoning behind the events of the original black pine. Really tied the whole thing together nicely. Also, badass Kajin was right: This really did feel like a video game.

However, I was still disappointed with your character's death. When I finished reading that part I said to myself, "Of course the black guy dies first. He always does!" Lol.

And with this finally checked off, I think I may have read every canon story written by you my good friend. Reading your work is certainly always a pleasure and I do hope to see more of it!

Side Note:

Spoiler

Psssst! Lego if you ever decide to do a sequel of this be sure to include ya boy

[eldritchmaestro]

Damn, son. Don't you know zombies eat you when you dig up graves?

You deserve a medal for this, truly. That's some titan effort right there. Wait, definitely not telling you to do anything about it but did you already read Dystop? Because that's still part of my canon literature.

I feel super motivated to make more now. And hah! I loved that death scene man. It was hilarious. And haha! I didn't even know I was going for the black guy thing till you mentioned it. To be fair, a lot of people already bit it waaay before the raiders came in to check stuff out.

I wanted Black Pine to be video-game like on purpose. From the chapter titles to the speed to the convenient challenges the characters face in every 'level'.


Cheers again Frono!

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Haha if. And that's a huuge if. If there's a sequel sure, I'll write you in the sequel of death and despair.

[Coach Fro]

I definitely deserve a special grave digger medal or something along those lines. I dug up a lot of old story topics these past few months, which isn't an easy task I might add. You gotta do the some hardcore digging to find some of this stuff. A good memory helps a lot as well.

And yes I did read the first Dystop already. I read it some years ago, maybe around the time when you were finishing the up the second one. I'm still mad I didn't bash any skulls in Dystop 2 by the way...

[eldritchmaestro]

Oh gawd I'm losing braincells! How could I forget hahahaha.

And yeah I needed to keep it PG 13... So only stabbing and slashing and general blood allowed. No skull bashing.

It just occured to me writing a sequel to Black Pine would be impossible. Read The Science Division Raid Arc in Day of 1,000 Styles to see why haha. It's weird how Canon mutates like this.


Medal is going to be made, bro