I finally finished the information for the childhood friend, if you want to tell whats good and whats bad about it, that would really help

here you go:
Profile for: Childhood Friend
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Beliefs/Religion: He doesn't like to think about things like fate as he prefers to believe he is in control of his life
Hobby: Looking at insects and collecting data on them
Basic Description: Shaggy, mud brown, short hair, green eyes, glasses, attractive
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Current Information
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>family background
his family moved from Japan because all their relatives lived in England and were asking them to come over to England so that they could 'keep the family close'
>birth place
Japan
>history, background
he has known the main character for years and has tried to stay in contact with her but is thrilled when she moves to England
>home
lives down the road from the main character in a semi-detacted house with his mum, dad and older brother
>possesions, make-up, jewelry, etc.
black glasses
>pets
a big dog
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Physical Description
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>hair style
shaggy, mud brown, short hair
>eyes
emerald green
>body
has muscles but not in an obvious way
>physical condition
healthy
>marks,scar,tattoo
none
>clothing
school uniform
normal clothes (t-shirt and baggy trousers with trainers)
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Personality
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>likes
sciene, bugs
>dislikes
jocks
>fears
heights and that the main character will reject him
>goals
to go out with the main character
>hobbies
looking at bugs
>occupation
high school
>favorite food
curry
>least favorite food
mushrooms
>most prized possesion (important or emotional value)
his laptop
>vernacular (way of speaking)
speaks confidently
>psychological condition
fine
>character behaviour
confident but a little bit of a nerd>
>social and other pressure, problems
he is happy with his social status but he can see that the main character wants more so he tries to help her wherever he can
>relationships (with who and what kind)
he is head of heels with the main character but does not know about her feelings for his older brother
he respects his older brother
>beliefs, superstition, moral value
he believes everything must have a scientific explanataion
>positive characteristics
he is thoughtful, reliable and nice
>negatives characteristics
he likes to mess around and goof off somethimes and he likes to tease the main character
>personality
he is a cheerful person who, although geeky at times, is respected by people