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Offline socks11

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Hannah's Manga Comic
« on: August 15, 2010, 09:25:59 AM »
I finally finished the information for the childhood friend, if you want to tell whats good and whats bad about it, that would really help :D here you go:

Profile for: Childhood Friend


Gender: Male
Age: 16
Beliefs/Religion: He doesn't like to think about things like fate as he prefers to believe he is in control of his life
Hobby: Looking at insects and collecting data on them

Basic Description: Shaggy, mud brown, short hair, green eyes, glasses, attractive

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Current Information
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>family background
his family moved from Japan because all their relatives lived in England and were asking them to come over to England so that they could 'keep the family close'
>birth place
Japan
>history, background
he has known the main character for years and has tried to stay in contact with her but is thrilled when she moves to England
>home
lives down the road from the main character in a semi-detacted house with his mum, dad and older brother
>possesions, make-up, jewelry, etc.
black glasses
>pets
a big dog

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Physical Description
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>hair style
shaggy, mud brown, short hair
>eyes
emerald green
>body
has muscles but not in an obvious way
>physical condition
healthy
>marks,scar,tattoo
none
>clothing
school uniform
normal clothes (t-shirt and baggy trousers with trainers)

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Personality
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>likes
sciene, bugs
>dislikes
jocks
>fears
heights and that the main character will reject him
>goals
to go out with the main character
>hobbies
looking at bugs
>occupation
high school
>favorite food
curry
>least favorite food
mushrooms
>most prized possesion (important or emotional value)
his laptop
>vernacular (way of speaking)
speaks confidently
>psychological condition
fine
>character behaviour
confident but a little bit of a nerd>
>social and other pressure, problems
he is happy with his social status but he can see that the main character wants more so he tries to help her wherever he can
>relationships (with who and what kind)
he is head of heels with the main character but does not know about her feelings for his older brother
he respects his older brother
>beliefs, superstition, moral value
he believes everything must have a scientific explanataion
>positive characteristics
he is thoughtful, reliable and nice
>negatives characteristics
he likes to mess around and goof off somethimes and he likes to tease the main character
>personality
he is a cheerful person who, although geeky at times, is respected by people
« Last Edit: August 15, 2010, 05:40:51 PM by socks11 »
If there was no change, there would be no butterflys.

My manga project:
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: New Character
« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 10:28:32 AM »
Wow, that's a big, deep character list. It'd be cool to see you're drawing of this character. And in in action, in general. This project is a comic, right? Looking forward to some of it, if you are drawing a comic...


(Next time you should probably post this in your storie's topic, to avoid using too much space.)

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Re: New Character
« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 10:51:26 AM »
I agree with what Lego says. Except if you design new characters and also place them here, then it should be ok.

Anyway it's indeed very deep, and I love that. I can't wait until you draw him!
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Re: New Character
« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 11:33:34 AM »
I don't think I will be drawing them because I'm not that good but yes it is a manga comic and I am currently looking for an artist at the moment, and I think I will be putting the rest of my character designs in here ;D
If there was no change, there would be no butterflys.

My manga project:
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: New Character
« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 11:41:15 AM »
This picture was not done by me but one of the artists I am considering, this person did not do the cat girl picture and the people in this picture are the main character, the childhood friend and the older brother

If there was no change, there would be no butterflys.

My manga project:
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: New Character
« Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 11:41:58 AM »
Ok, you're NOT good at drawing?! Wut? Did... Did you hear that Lego? She says she's not good at it. Hahahaa!

Ok... Maniacal thoughts off. If you're looking for an artist, you're at the right place. I could try to draw him, but I've got much more requests (one, a Tan) to draw. So that's going to have to be later.
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Re: New Character
« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2010, 11:43:41 AM »
Ok and I just don't think I'm good enough to draw a whole comic and I'd love it if you could try, at the moment I've got two other artists I'm considering
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http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: New Character
« Reply #7 on: August 15, 2010, 11:49:06 AM »
I wanna see you do it. Those artists might be better at it, etc, but if it comes from the maker herself, it's much better. I know from experience.
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Re: New Character
« Reply #8 on: August 15, 2010, 12:38:39 PM »
Wow... not good.... right Just look at those sketches!

And Toasty's got a point. You've got a really good set up. You have the art and the story. What should stop you from making the manga yourself?

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Re: New Character
« Reply #9 on: August 15, 2010, 01:22:18 PM »
/agree with everyone else

also i would say you should rename this topic sock's characters or (your story's name here)'s characters. i would suggest doing something similar with the story's actual topic by just renaming the topic to that of your story. it will help people draw the connection between the two topics and give it all a sort of brand name if you will

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Re: New Character
« Reply #10 on: August 15, 2010, 03:17:23 PM »
/agree with everyone else, but i will also add in that that sketch page had pie int it XD

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Re: New Character
« Reply #11 on: August 15, 2010, 03:27:32 PM »
Wait. It did!

That cake looks great. So delicious and moist.
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Re: New Character
« Reply #12 on: August 15, 2010, 05:29:39 PM »
@TOSTIFICER I might have a go at doing it myself but I've never drawn without reference before, its gonna be hard

@LEGOMAESTRO sorry to disapoint you :Embarrassed: they aren't my sketches but I actually think I could do better than that :D

@CORYN SKEN will do after I figure out how to do that

@AERO I don't actually know why the artist did that
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http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: Hannah's Manga Comic
« Reply #13 on: August 15, 2010, 09:07:11 PM »
The character looks pretty good  :) Quite unique, too...
It's up to you as to get an artist or just draw it yourself  :D Though make sure that the artist you choose is willing to make a long-term commitment. That is a must llD

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Re: Hannah's Manga Comic
« Reply #14 on: August 16, 2010, 05:09:16 AM »
very true  :D
If there was no change, there would be no butterflys.

My manga project:
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0