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Author Topic: Hannah's Manga Comic  (Read 4979 times)

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Offline socks11

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Hannah's Manga Comic
« on: August 13, 2010, 05:35:19 PM »
Ok so I have this really good idea for a manga story, I've had loads of character ideas for ages but haven't had an actual story idea but even though I can draw anime I have came to realise I am just not good enough to do this all by myself but I don't want to wait ages to get good enough because I'm afraid I'll lose my story idea and won't understand it later on. So here you go heres a teaser...

Basically my story is about a girl who has just moved from Japan to England (she already knows English) because of her dads job changing, here she finds that her old childhood friend lives on her street and when visiting him she finds herself developing a massive crush on his older brother whilst her old friend is developing a crush on her, from there on she tries to deal with this crush whilst trying to get on at school and meeting a whole host of strange and unusual characters.

Also here is a character profile for the main character so you can get a taste for the characters

Profile for: Main Character


Gender: Female
Age: 15
Beliefs/Religion: believes there must be something out there
Hobby: drawing


Basic Description:mid length, brown curly hair, bright blue eyes, school girl


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Current Information
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>family background - Her family sometimes annoy but she loves them all the same

>birth place - england

>history, background - she moved from her old home because of her dads new job and surprisingly found that her childhood friend lives on the same street as her

>home - normal semi-detachted house

>possesions, make-up, jewelry, etc. - lots of braclets/bangles but not heavy makeup (no dark makeup)

>pets - two gerbils


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Physical Description
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>hair style - brown, mid-length, curly hair

>eyes - sky blue in colour

>body - not crazy about fitness but not over-weight and not tall

>physical condition - healthy

>marks,scar,tattoo - none

>clothing - school uniform and normal clothing (t-shirt and skirt)


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Personality
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>likes - animals, science, art

>dislikes - gothic things, scary movies

>fears - spiders

>goals - to become a vet

>hobbies - helping out at the animal shelter and drawing

>occupation - high school

>favorite food - chicken

>least favorite food - spicy food

>most prized possesion (important or emotional value) - a necklace given by her childhood friend

>vernacular (way of speaking) - english accent

>psychological condition - normal

>character behaviour - can be emotional at times but generally cheerful

>social and other pressure, problems - trys to be popular but mostly ends up embarrasing herself


« Last Edit: August 15, 2010, 05:41:28 PM by socks11 »
If there was no change, there would be no butterflys.

My manga project:
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2010, 05:39:07 PM »
There's your basic high school drama! (Sorta)

No, this can become good. Just make sure that you twist the story so that it doesn't become just like any other stories.

Furthermore, I advise you to go and check the site some more, look at other stories. You might get some inspiration, and if you communicate with the MR members, I'm sure they'll help you.

Also, what would be ok is if you made a topic in the Welcome Center, so you can introduce yourself.
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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2010, 05:40:48 PM »
First, why not introduce yourself? http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?board=4.0

The story is a romance-drama. That's tough to write so I hope to see character descriptions and maybe a preview of a chapter or something? I don't see anything too wrong expect that i don't see anything that stands out yet. I need to see the 'strange and unusual characters'

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2010, 05:42:38 PM »
i think you could pull it off if you can put forth the right amount of effort.

and like the others said please make yourself a topic in the welcome center to introduce yourself

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2010, 05:45:04 PM »
hmm well for this i would definitly watch out for stepping over other manga and anime, this general plot is pretty popular and theres a lot of stuff out there, most of it doing pretty well. depending on the characters this could be very original and interesting though. i would say make sure the characters are awesome and try to do something unique with the basic plot, if you get that down your golden

on a side note why not make a thread in the Welcome Center and tell us a bit about yourself :P



EDIT: man three replies while i was typing... guess everyone else said waht i wanted too...

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #5 on: August 13, 2010, 06:00:03 PM »
ok everyone thanks for your comments and I have introduced myself now  (I completely forgot to do that before so thanks for the reminder)  :D
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http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #6 on: August 13, 2010, 06:06:39 PM »
Heh, I remember when I was a newb, I was flooded with posts telling me to go introduce myself.

...Oh wait, I AM the newb! =_="
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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #7 on: August 13, 2010, 06:08:38 PM »
haha toaty :P


technically im still new aswell >_> only been here a few months...


anyways any idea on when we can see more on this story?

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #8 on: August 13, 2010, 06:20:50 PM »
haha toaty :P


technically im still new aswell >_> only been here a few months...


anyways any idea on when we can see more on this story?

well thats all I've got at the moment but I have got the main character profiled so if you want to see that you can :D
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http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #9 on: August 13, 2010, 06:23:15 PM »
Yes!

I'm off to see the last out of three Indiana Jones movies, and after that I'll hit the bed. Good night everyone.

And socks, I'll see your work tomorrow. (Our time 0:22. I hate timezones).
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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #10 on: August 13, 2010, 06:24:48 PM »
Yes!

I'm off to see the last out of three Indiana Jones movies, and after that I'll hit the bed. Good night everyone.

And socks, I'll see your work tomorrow. (Our time 0:22. I hate timezones).

Ok see you tomorrow and its 11:25pm here so i should be in bed to but oh well :D
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http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3208.0 http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=3221.0

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #11 on: August 13, 2010, 06:47:31 PM »
sure i wouldn't mind a character profile =P

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #12 on: August 13, 2010, 06:48:34 PM »
sure i wouldn't mind a character profile =P

ok hang on a sec I'll modify the top bit so it shows that as well
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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #13 on: August 13, 2010, 07:05:52 PM »
nice bio. love how the favorite food is chicken  :D

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Re: Do you think this is a good idea?
« Reply #14 on: August 13, 2010, 07:08:57 PM »
very nice =P

now we just need the two brothers and some more of the story should come into view